Dil's just rocking along in a relationship with a girl who's good enough. Her best friend, though, is what he's thinking about, but he knows he shouldn't, because she's in a relationship of her own. But things get complicated sometimes.
Size: 85 KB (16,488 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Cheating, Polygamy/Polyamory, First, Masturbation, Oral Sex
Review by burka_oz [other reviews by burka_oz]
Reviewed:
Oyster has always come up with good stories, and I have been reading his tales for many years now. Always good. So is this one.
5 Chapters. Different chapters speak from different viewpoints.
I liked that.
Man lives with a girl, but the wrong girl. They live together but they don't love together.
Girl's best friend is off-limits till her boyfriend strikes up with other boys.
Time for sparks to fly and Boy falls for the other girl in a nice friendly way and nobody gets hurt.
This tale is a very pleasant interlude from Oyster's other tales/sagas.
For starters, all of these players are adults. All of them work or study but none of them could be rated at the unrestrained genius level. True romance is there along with some nice loving. No steamy sex scenes here, just good loving.
I really enjoyed the change and the tale. This is worth reading and I think many of you would enjoy it.
I would really be sorry if this couple somehow wound up in the middle of the Saga. I hope Oyster doesn't have that as his plan, I don't think these two would fit within the madness of the Saga.
So, my scores:
Plot: Fun story, there is a plot there, It works. 8
Technical: Not a spot where I could see any problems. Well written and tightly edited. 9.
Appeal. Yeah, I'm smiling, I enjoyed it. 9
I wish them luck with their life. Invite me to their Wedding, Oyster LOL
