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Author's Description:
A murder leads to mayhem for a clueless husband.
Size: 40 KB (8,008 words)
Genre: Humor
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Heterosexual, Humor

Review by BobbyBrandt   [other reviews by BobbyBrandt]

Reviewed:


Another enjoyable tale by one of SOL's most popular authors.

There isn't a lot of focus on character development. Time isn't wasted reliving how the main character and his wife met. The story flows well and does the work.

The author provides ample details to allow the reader to grasp the nuances of the plot and events within the story without boring us with every minute bit of superfluous information. There may be a few points where a bit more of an explanation would allow the intentions of the author to be clearer, but these do no detract from the overall excellent quality of the story.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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