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Author's Description:
A short, true story of a memory. A cheating husband and a virginal older woman.
Size: 29 KB (5,376 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Heterosexual, True Story, Cheating

Review by smokeaknz   [other reviews by smokeaknz]

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For those who enjoy good writing: READ THIS STORY!

"Robin" is not an author I had noticed before, but I have now added him to my "Follow" list, and I plan to try to work my way through his collection (currently at 83 stories, so I'm thinking there is lots to anticipate savoring).

The truly masterful use of simile and metaphor, the wonderful understanding of seduction and pace, the almost absolute cleanliness of the text entry, all of these contribute to a superb reading experience.

This story is short, but it's not a stroke story. Read it, savor it, come back to it again in the future some time. Score it a ten, and plan to submit it for a Clitoride early next year.

Oh, and send a thank you to the author.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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