Put Your Hand in Mine by Writer Mick

Author's Description:
Mick walked into my former bedroom. His brown eyes looked up at me. Somehow they didn’t seem as bright anymore. He didn’t want this either, but for him it was for a simple reason. He believed completely in the fact that he could trust his mommy and daddy to take care of his world. He was in the process of learning that wasn’t true. A rough way to learn it.
Size: 56 KB (11,765 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fiction, Cheating

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

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Writer Mick has created a compelling story ‘Put Your Hand in Mine’, that is full of drama and anger.

Paul, Deb’s husband has just returned from a cancelled fishing day with his son, Mick. Finding a strange car in the drive way, leaving Mick in the truck, Paul slips quietly into the house, catching Deb and her paramore in the throes of cheating.

Paul’s life changes at that moment. What happens to his son, Mick? What about Deb? How does Paul handle the situation?

Writer Mick tells a great story full of heart and despair. A quick tale that moves one to feel the emotional tempest of a family falling apart.

I strongly suggest that Writer Mick continues this tragedy to its conclusion.