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Author's Description:
Husband's happy life hits some speed bumps when large chested lady friend accuses him of improper behavior at a party.
Size: 23 KB (4,548 words)
Genre: Humor
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Heterosexual, Humor

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed:


Just a quick review of “Harddaysknight’s” excellent story “Tell Me What You See” a short tale in the suburbia world.

In this reflection of a life at a party in the neighborhood, Jack the main character, is propositioned by Betty Thol. After the party Jack informs his wife Sarah about the incident while preparing to brush his teeth. On the following Saturday Jack and Sarah are accosted at their home by the aforementioned Betty and her husband Tim.

The story only gets more interesting the further you read. It is a very short story without any sex but there is some “boob” play from various members of the community.

How does the tale turn out? The author has written a very quaint story of infidelity or maybe attempted playing around in a party atmosphere.

There is a startling conclusion in “Tell Me What You See” if you ask me.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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