Reviewed:
If you're a fan of the Alien franchise, then you will love this story!
It has the classic Alien vibe, all the elements that make it good, and then some. I won't spoil the plot, but I never pictured those aliens as being sexy, however, Snekguy pulled it off.
The plot deserves a 10 since it has several nice twists. It's a short story, but in the pages he has he managed several twists without it ever feeling rushed.
The technical side also scores a 10 since I didn't read any mistakes in grammar/ spelling/ sentence structure.
I'm giving a 9 for appeal since I reserve my 10's for the truly epic stories, but if I'm fair, it'd be closer to a 9.5 than a 9. I would have loved to read a continuation of this story, but it ends at a fitting moment, leaving the reader free to imagine what happens next.