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When the kings and lords of the World become corrupt and vile, when the cries of the desperate and the destitute become too loud to bear, when the world sings out for a savior, the Sun chooses for himself a hero to strike down the wicked and set the World right: The Unconquered. Blessed with unimaginable power, the Unconquered is granted too a sacred marriage to five Lunar wives - each as lovely and powerful as the last, each devoted to him. Hark! The Cycle of the 11th Unconquered begins!
Size: 909 KB (167,830 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Mult, Teenagers, Reluctant, Gay, Lesbian, BiSexual, Heterosexual, CrossDressing, Hermaphrodite, TransGender, Fiction, Fairy Tale, High Fantasy, Rags To Riches, Steampunk, Superhero, Science Fiction, Paranormal, Ghost, Vampires, Were animal, Sharing, Gang Bang, Group Sex, Harem, Polygamy/Polyamory, Interracial, Anal Sex, Analingus, Tit-Fucking, Small Breasts, Royalty

Review by Quasirandom   [other reviews by Quasirandom]

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Dragon Cobalt applies his trademark gonzo plotting and freewheeling fucking around to the sort of epic fantasy that has a Chosen One. ’Nuff said.

Well, okay, there’s a little more to say. First, once you get past the first chapter, it’s loads of fun. (Honestly, the start is a bit rocky — things don’t catch fire till Ember leaves his village.) (That’s not a spoiler. The Call to Adventure always requires that you leave your village.) Second, the harem is baked into the fantasy premise, and every one of Ember’s wives is awesomesauce. Third, the story is radically trans-inclusive. I lost count of the number of different trans identities that were welcomed and endorsed — and this, my friends, is a glorious thing. And finally, while the main genre is western epic fantasy, I cackled every time a detail derived from xuanhuan (Chinese fantasy based on traditional folklore and wuxia tropes) got hip-checked.

(Post-finally, the story description is awful. Ignore it.)

In other words, this story is loads of fun. Massive fun. You want to read it. Trust me. Just, well, promise me you’ll finish the first chapter before giving up, ’kay? Good.

Plot: 8 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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