Reviewed:
Note to self... Never read a story that clearly states it is "Book 1" when no other books in the series have been posted. All it does is leave you impatiently waiting for the sequel(s).
For plot, this story gets an A (8). Although the story is not finished, there is a tremendous amount of promise and it so far. If you enjoy fantasy books, this would be a good read. The author does a credible job of slowly inserting the backstory the main character and other characters.
For technical score, and outstanding 10. I found very few errors throughout the entire story.
For personal appeal, so far it gets another A (8). Why not a higher score? Very simply put, this is only the first installment of what promises to be a much longer story. Once the rest of the story is written, I reserve the right to revise my appeal score.
Now, to wait. I hope the author already has the sequel(s) written and ready to post.