The Rocker by Dbuck
The coming of age story of a bullied young man, who gets a break in life, only to bring more troubles.
Size: 430 KB (89,820 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, ft/ft, Teenagers, Romantic, BiSexual, Fiction, School, Cheating, FemaleDom, Black Female, Oriental Female, Hispanic Female, Foot Fetish
Review by Safe_Bet [other reviews by Safe_Bet]
Reviewed:
Hmmmm... did I like it? Oh, hell yeah! Let me break it down for you as to why:
Plot: I'd give it a rating of 9, me thinks. It was a bit predictable because of the past/present time jumps, but it was a VERY good story.
Technical: I'm afraid that I have to give Dbuck's technical writing skills a 6. WAAAY too many incorrect homonyms (stop trusting MS Office's global spell check or whatever the hell you use!), missing words and/or grammatical errors. There were also too many "semi-cut & paste" scenes. Repetitious writing doesn't get it, dude. Bottom line is Dbuck definitely needs a technical editor!
Appeal: How the hell can you NOT find a well written "bullied" to "Rock & Roll Hero" story appealing? The characters come across well, the story line is cohesive and it was just a fun read. HIGHLY recommended! You gotta love ROCK & ROLL!
