Book 2 in the story of Davik. Still reeling from the events of the last blood moon, Davik needs to come to terms of the fallout. Will he be able to figure out how to move forward? Will this dark figure succeed in his attempts to kill him?
Size: 437 KB (87,590 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Heterosexual, non-anthro, Were animal, Bestiality, Cream Pie, Oral Sex, Petting, Safe Sex, Big Breasts, Size, Revenge, Slow
Review by manddscott [other reviews by manddscott]
Reviewed:
This review is for the first two books of "Blood Moon Chronicles". A boy's life is turned upside down when a wolf attacks and kills his parents. He goes to live with his grandparents in a different town, going back to his original town after his grandparents die. This story has some paranormal/werewolf lore in it. If you're not a fan of that type of story, stay away.
For plot, I give the story (so far) an A (8). There are some twists and turns, but overall it seems fine.
There are some unrealistic expectations in the story which call in the need for a good editor. The technical aspects are fine, with an A (8) score overall. The main issues with the story are a few (not many) mistaken use of homophones. What the editor would address are some other things. For example, the author describes the MC as cutting down a tree that has a 6-foot diameter in one hour using an axe. Paul Bunyan is not how he was described, although he is described as a big guy. For another, the 6-foot diameter, 8-foot long log that is subsequently picked up by 3 men has to weigh at least a ton, with the average weight of a log that size approaching 5 tons. Also, the MC's girl in this story is inexperienced with men when she first has any sexual relations with him, yet manages to deep throat a male organ described as 10 inches long and as big around as his wrist without any hesitation or problem.
For appeal, although the story has some small issues, I still give it an A (8) so far. Overall, a good read. I am looking forward to part 3 being finished so that I can read the (possible) conclusion of the story.
