Hero the Escape by Shaddoth

Author's Description:
I have given this story a complete rewrite. (and needed cleaning.) A successful hero flees his home world after subjugating the Dragon Queen and her hosts to start anew on a young, fresh world only to encounter politics. Again...
Size: 295 KB (55,377 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, High Fantasy

Review by Gemini1766   [other reviews by Gemini1766]

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An interesting story about a man who has lost all he held dear. A new start in a new world, but peace is difficult to find. This is especially true when idiots abound.

I find this to be a decent story, but the author needs an editor or two to point out the mistakes, of which there are many. Missing personal pronouns, swapped words in sentences, improperly done dialog, and more.