Author's Description:
I thought I'd found my perfect girl in Nell. I'd been her boyfriend for almost six months, and I was home and telling my Mom all about her. Then it suddenly struck me that there was something just not quite right with our relationship. I couldn't exactly put my finger on it, so I snooped on her the next time she cancelled on us meeting up, and I found out that she was still seeing an older married guy on the side. Damn, how I wished I hadn't gotten curious!
Size: 150 KB (30,281 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, Romantic, Heterosexual, School, Tear Jerker, Workplace
I thought I'd found my perfect girl in Nell. I'd been her boyfriend for almost six months, and I was home and telling my Mom all about her. Then it suddenly struck me that there was something just not quite right with our relationship. I couldn't exactly put my finger on it, so I snooped on her the next time she cancelled on us meeting up, and I found out that she was still seeing an older married guy on the side. Damn, how I wished I hadn't gotten curious!
Size: 150 KB (30,281 words)
Genre: Drama
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, mt/ft, Ma/ft, Romantic, Heterosexual, School, Tear Jerker, Workplace
Review by Lugh [other reviews by Lugh]
Reviewed:
Wow. I usually wait to review a story until I've had time to digest it, but the button was just too tempting.
There are no technical flaws. The plot, to put it mildly, is complex. Some of the best aspects, unfortunately, would be spoilers.
The greatest strength of this tale is its humanity, of believable characters that encounter tragedy. If I believed in gods, even in fiction, I'd say they had to work hard for resolution.
It's a tragedy, it's a romance, and it's even reasonably erotic without being gynecological.
Read it.
Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
