A Life in the Service by Ka Hmnd

Author's Description:
The saga of a young man who joins the space forces
Size: 201 KB (38,117 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: War, Science Fiction, Space

Review by anim8ed   [other reviews by anim8ed]

Reviewed:

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Sigh. While I am happy to see this story posted to SOL and hope more of Ka Hmnd's off site stories will follow, I am disappointed that there was no editing.

Basically the story is one man's military career and is an exciting action filled tale. Unfortunately it suffers badly from technical faults. Homophones and poorly worded phrases abound with many abrupt and mid-paragraph scene changes making for a rough story flow. There is no graphically described sex though that is not necessarily a bad thing.

Overall I enjoyed the story despite the problems. If you are looking for an erotic tale you won't find it here. It is primarily an action story and if that appeals to you I would recommend giving it a try.