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Author's Description:
A young farmer with an ailing mother gets help from a large, blue-skinned, demon-like woman called an oni in return for a little bit of sexy time. As their relationship grows, they discover the young man has mysterious abilities and a special affinity for magic which will lead him on a journey that puts him into contact, and often deep inside, a variety of monster girls
Size: 1220 KB (236,222 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Mult, Magic, Fiction, High Fantasy, Harem, Anal Sex, Cream Pie, Oral Sex, Pregnancy

Review by fixitman8267   [other reviews by fixitman8267]

Reviewed:


I believe this author managed to create a fantasy story about one man's journey to become a powerful magic user. By choosing runic magic the author was able to get away with describing the function of the rune without making the story seem like a lesson in runic magic.

The lack of character development made the townspeople seem more like NPCs. Sex was mentioned to aid in developing character relations without turning the story into a stroke story. It allowed the author to develop the storyline rather than detract from it.

I, personally, don't need sex in a story to enjoy it. This is an example of a story that has enough merit to be worth your time to read it.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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