In an alternate universe, with events not too unlike our own, young James Brighton is put in a tough spot as he loses everything dearest to him. Upon her death, his mother leaves him a letter, informing Jim of family that he still has! In the search for his lost family, join James and his friends as they embark on a high flying adventure which will test them in ways they haven't imagined and reveal the truth of who they are!
Size: 534 KB (101,436 words)
Incomplete and Inactive
Genre: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Fa/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Romantic, Lesbian, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Historical, War, Sharing, Group Sex, Polygamy/Polyamory, Interracial, Black Male, Black Female, White Male, White Female, Oriental Male, Oriental Female, Hispanic Male, Hispanic Female, Indian Female, Black Couple, White Couple, Anal Sex, Cream Pie, Double Penetration, Masturbation, Safe Sex, Sex Toys, Tit-Fucking, BBW, Big Breasts
Review by Threesheets [other reviews by Threesheets]
Reviewed:
This is an excellently written piece. Alternative history is fun to read. I didn't like the extensive sex between the hero and his two ladies. I can see a third coming along soon.
This story DOES NOT NEED IT ! ! ! It's that good. The story seems to be plot driven and character strong. I very seldom, like never, review something that isn't complete. This is the exception.
So far it has a lead in to a story, revenge, wanting a better life, escape from suppression, and a bit of romance. Build up the sex then let the reader imagine. If they can't they should go back to Dick and Jane or maybe Dr. Seuss.
Finish this story, it's worth every keystroke.
'sheets
Review by olddave1951 [other reviews by olddave1951]
Reviewed:
It's a damn good story.
Two chapters so far. The first chapter presents an alternative history to World War II and life thereafter. Second chapter gets into more detailed and exciting things.
You owe yourself to read it.
The sad thing although it's been downloaded over 7000 times only 159 people have bothered to vote for it. Read it, voted, and let swirling Jedi know how much you enjoyed it. I did not vote on the technical. My education is not in that Realm.
