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Author's Description:
Chelsea is a newbie when it comes to learning the power of her sexuality. But on this memorable All-Hallow's Eve, her enthusiasm as a student earns both the dark affection of a teacher, and the welcome confidence of a precocious younger sister.
Size: 12 KB (2,196 words)
Genre: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Fa/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Lesbian, Fiction, Oral Sex, Petting

Review by joyR   [other reviews by joyR]

Reviewed:


In the last few weeks this author has begun posting a collection of stories, six at present, with hopefully more to follow. Currently all are short and most are marked as stroke stories.

So why does this story deserve a review?

Not, I must admit because it is highly appealing, nor is the plot by any means unique. What makes this story stand out is the quality of writing.

Whilst it is not entirely error free, there are none that give the reader pause, or distract from the flow of reading. So, although close attention should be paid to the story codes, if you are looking for a well written story, this author is well worth keeping an eye on.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 6
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