No matter what I did Brandon was always better. No matter where I went, he'd been there first. These are my adventures in love, lust and life.
Size: 463 KB (93,049 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, Ma/Ma, Coercion, Consensual, Romantic, Gay, Heterosexual, Cheating
Review by Safe_Bet [other reviews by Safe_Bet]
Reviewed:
YIKES! Stangstar06 really wrote a seriously convoluted, action packed, romantic, heart breaker, etc., etc. etc. story with this one! I'd tell you that the plot contains everything except the kitchen sink, but I think that was mentioned too! With all of the twist and turns (some times in spite of them) this is a GREAT story.
Synopsis: The "Hero" is a good guy who can't seem to catch a break. His "best friend" screws him over with his fiancé, he later falls in love with someone else who he can't be with, he falls in love AGAIN with a different person who he can't be with and his initial fiancé schemes how to get him back throughout the whole story! Oh, the hell with... read the damn story and find out the rest of the juicy parts! LOL
Plot: If you think you can just "assume" where this plot is going or ends up, you best be thinking again! It keeps you guessing and definitely keeps you reading.
Technical: There were a few "oopsies", but nothing of note. The tags matched and there was nothing that affected readability.
Appeal: This story really got me talking to myself, I'll tell you! I boo'ed the bad guys, cheered on the hero, felt sad when there was pain and was glad when people were happy. Evoking emotions is the sign of good writing and this story evoked a LOT of them. This is, in my opinion anyways, one of the best stories Stangstar06 has written. Well done and HIGHLY recommended.
