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Jack Kruger has been back in Brooklyn for some time now and he yearns to return to the past and witness those battles that he had studied for so many years in his military studies. The American Civil War was fresh in his memory, but now he was focused on the American Revolution and he wanted to begin in 1775 right at the beginning in order to follow the time line in a way that made it easy for him to understand Washington's strategy.
Size: 280 KB (51,744 words)
Genre: Time Travel
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Historical, War, Time Travel, Anal Sex, Cream Pie, Exhibitionism, Oral Sex, Squirting, Voyeurism, Doctor/Nurse, Violent

Review by EndlessReader   [other reviews by EndlessReader]

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Subway Part 1 and Subway Part 2 are written in vastly different ways. Where 1 has a main character and plenty of action, 2 has only an observer with almost no participation other than a few sex scenes. I believe those were added only to keep reader interest in a story which otherwise only avid history buffs can really appreciate.

There is no real involvement by the main character except to tell the story and offer some really thoughtful insights as he continually decides not to mess with any of the activity taking place around him. Instead, we are given a lesson in American History, subtopic The American Revolutionary War, and the author has certainly done an amazing job researching the material for this story. With a few exceptions, the text could probably be used in an American History class, but as an SOL story it left me high and dry.

Disclaimer: This review is for only THIS story. Please do not hesitate to read RW's other works.

Plot: 2 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 2
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