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Author's Description:
Driving down the road in the Mesilla Valley of southern New Mexico, sandwiched in the few hundred yards between the Robledo Mountains to the West and the Rio Grande to the East, Paul McAllister loses consciousness while returning home from a gun show. An hour later, he regains consciousness finding himself swept away on the tides of time. So begins his journey of discovery.
Size: 1018 KB (199,218 words)
Genre: Western
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Fiction, Western, Time Travel

Review by therev   [other reviews by therev]

Reviewed:


I am not American, however, I found that the author was entertaining and enlightening, especially with the sometimes stretched descriptions of the location and history. As he did grow up in the area, I have to accept that he does know what he is talking about.

He lost a couple of 'technical' points for some errors which slipped through all the checking, otherwise it was a very easy and good read. Congratulations.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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