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Author's Description:
Charlie finds his "soulmate", falls in love and soon finds himself embroiled in "self-discovery". He and his friends/lovers begin learning about love, life and. things they never thought possible! This story is a "What if it could really happen" fantasy/romance/action-adventure, of learning and dealing with newfound abilities.
Size: 2800 KB (551,663 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Ma/ft, mt/Fa, Fa/Fa, Fa/ft, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Humor, Superhero, Tear Jerker, Workplace, Science Fiction, Extra Sensory Perception, Paranormal, Sharing, Incest, Group Sex, Polygamy/Polyamory, Swinging, Cream Pie, Double Penetration, Enema, Exhibitionism, First, Oral Sex, Safe Sex, Squirting, Voyeurism

Review by Gemini1766   [other reviews by Gemini1766]

Reviewed:


This is a story about a growing family with with telepathy, and other firms of ESP at various levels. One of them is a catalyst who can awaken such powers in others. There are engagements with some pretty bad people, violence, deaths, and a lot of sex. I won't go into detail.

The thing I enjoyed most about this story was the dialog. Sometimes it was a little much, but overall, it was very well done.

The ideas are good and often fun. But, it could have been much better.

The short comings are in missing, or incorrect words and word usage, grammar, and most grievous of all a lack of research on important points.

If you can suspend your disbelief sufficiently enough it will be fun and enjoyable. If you are the type to have kittens over the above mentioned problems, then I suggest that you stay clear.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 4 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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