The Shack: the Guardians by Todd_d172

Author's Description:
Dancing with the Monster's Daughter
Size: 121 KB ( ~ 22,945 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Fiction, Crime

Review by bill9900   [other reviews by bill9900]

Reviewed: 2018-05-09

Back in 2016, I reviewed Todd_d172's story "Blue Topaz Eyes" and suggested that visitors to had an opportunity to read some very interesting stories. He was new to SOL then, and all of his stories are a cut above many that get posted here. Totally worth reading.

The one I just finished is "The Shack: the Guardians", posted in September, 2017.

Todd_d172 writes an exceptional story. Top marks for imagination, plot line, the flow of dialog, etc. This story is very appealing and well laid out. The only slight-negative factor is that the grammar can occasionally seem a little awkward.

But it never gets in the way, so I highly recommend you give this story, and any of his other stories, a try. They make for some very enjoyable reading. And several bring a character or two along from another story, so it makes for a very interesting fictional world. Highly enjoyable!

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 8 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10