Young woman starts working in a adult shop.
Size: 40 KB (8,144 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Fa/Fa, Lesbian, Heterosexual, Anal Sex, Double Penetration, Enema, Exhibitionism, Masturbation, Sex Toys, Water Sports, Public Sex
Review by richardshagrin [other reviews by richardshagrin]
Reviewed:
This is a different kind of story than I have reviewed before. It probably is not going to appeal to every reader, but it has a lot more sex than most on the site, and if that is what you want, you get it with this one.
Doing the numbers, the plot is certainly adequate and because I liked the story I will give it a 7, which is better than average. There aren't a lot of twists and turns, but it does well supporting the star of the story, a heroine I guess, in finding lots of opportunities for orgasms. The Technical is a 6, pretty average for many SOL stories, if it has been edited, there is no credit given and I thought there were errors the author should have caught. The appeal is a 7, good, better than average.
The author has one other story on the site, in my opinion is is not as good as this one, although it is just a full of sex. I went on line to try to find any other stories by this author but did not succeed in finding any. If you want to read a story about a female porn-star getting started and really enjoying her job, this is the one to read.
