Reviewed:
This is a great story. It is well paced, playful, happy. Renpet does his expected magic, building a pair of characters whom you enjoy meeting, then building a story that doesn't require you believe in alternate universes or superheroes. all you have to do it go along for a pleasant ride, watching two people figure out that they're supposed to be happily, joyously together.
I couldn't find anything to complain about. The piece is well edited and well-written.
It's not a fluke, either. The dude's good. Read the other stuff he's written. You could do worse. MUCH worse.