Boy meets girl in a sexually open society.
Size: 251 KB (50,199 words)
Genre: Erotica
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Mother, Brother, Sister, Group Sex, Interracial, Anal Sex, Cream Pie, Oral Sex
Review by richardshagrin [other reviews by richardshagrin]
Reviewed:
Every once in a while I read a story that I can recommend to anyone who reads stories on SOL. However, this may not be it. It has way too much sex. And I am not sure it has a happy ending. But I enjoyed it and if you don't mind almost all sex, almost all the time, you may enjoy it too.
I liked some of the author's other stories, although we disagree on how big a change a quantum change would be. And Lance C makes me think of Lance Corporal. And I don't want any corporal punishment.
Lets discuss the scores I gave the story. The plot is a 7, better than average, a B in the high school of scoring. There is a lot of different locations and the characters change in most of the chapters, but what happens is different kinds of sex. Too much of a good thing has an impact on how complex and therefore superior the plot appeals to this reviewer.
The Technical score is an 8, an A. I didn't see any problems, maybe the score should be higher. But I get to assign the numbers and the story just isn't an A+ to me. I like it, I don't love it to death. And I also gave an 8 to Appeal. I recommend that others read the story, as long as mostly sex is what they enjoy reading about. The author has created a world a lot like ours, except nearly everyone has sex with most of the others. Just to be polite.
