Reviewed:
It took me 3 days to read this story, not because it is extremely long, but because I have been working 2 jobs and about 80 hours a week. That leaves very little time for my favorite pastime, reading. I used to read at night before falling asleep, but find that these days I can simply lay down my head and be asleep in less than a minute. I managed to login to Sol 3 days ago and noticed this story have been posted. I decided to try and read it quickly, only to find that the first two chapters were much longer than expected.
This is a story of romance, and a little bit of Supernatural mixed in. The love of a man's life passes away at a relatively young age, and is reborn. 14 years later, she finds his way back into his life. Is it fake? Is it destiny? Whatever it is, do not read the first chapter unless you expect to bawl your eyes out. The pain is palpable.
For plot, I give this an A (8). It skims over much that could be, but fills in most of the gaps nicely.
For technical score, an A+ (9). It was virtually error-free.
For appeal, another A+ (9). Well done again, Renpet.