Hadrian's Wall by Reluctant_Sir

Author's Description:
Have you ever seen someone that looks like they have it all? Fame, fortune, hung like a horse with a new woman on his arm every week? Then why don't they seem happy? (Note: Unedited, so be forewarned)[Violence]
Size: 649 KB ( ~ 123,070 words)
Genre: Coming of Age
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, mt/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, DomSub, First, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Masturbation, Size

Review by manddscott   [other reviews by manddscott]

Reviewed: 2018-02-01

A guy who seems to have it all describes the events that turned him into someone who others feel is cold, unloving. The majority of the story is a flashback on the man's teen years, as he attempts to find love.

For plot, I give this an A+ (9). Some of the side characters are not fully developed, but that is why they are side characters. The author does a very nice job with the main character, exploring his thoughts and the process which turns him into who he later is.

For technical score, a C (6). The author does warn us that it is an unedited story. There were a plethora of misspelled words, incomplete words, homophonic errors and other small mistakes.

For personal appeal, another A+ (9), even with all of the mistakes. The angst felt by the MC at times is palpable. In my opinion, this is one of those stories that overcome a bad technical score to be a very, very good story. Frankly, I've read a couple of other stories by this author, and am surprised that they did not score higher.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 6 | Appeal to Reviewer: 9