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Author's Description:
A Story in the "Damsels in Distress" universe. Hero Lincoln escapes to Crossroads with his Caretaker Lisa when violence erupts in his home on earth. But his companion, Cadence is left behind. He must get back to her and protect her from her lunatic father, but first, he and Lisa must take their adventure on Chaos performing magic and illusions as they join a traveling circus. This story has eight chapters.
Size: 208 KB (39,755 words)
Genre: Action/Adventure
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Science Fiction, Oral Sex, Pregnancy

Review by RabbiRabbit   [other reviews by RabbiRabbit]

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Damn you aroslav, I hate cliffhangers, between you and Harddaysknight I am going to be pounding out my effen history books because I have nothing I really want to read and I want to know what the hell happens. Plus I hate admitting that I was wrong and you were right, I hate this. And I really really really hate waiting. Really, almost as much as I hate cliffhangers.

Superb story, interesting universe, characters, lots of surprises...did I mention that I also hate surprises? This is part 2 of a trilogy, and after reading pretty much everything I could by aroslav I am thinking this will be like a Douglas Adams Trilogy, five books.

Lots of action here, plenty of plot, and did I mention that I hate cliffhangers. I am sure that in their own way aroslav and Harddaysknight think they are being clever...well, they are actually. They could not be more different in their styles, except of course for the cliff hanger part. Did I happen to mention that I hate cliffhangers? And waiting, i don't like that either.

Jumping into this story without having read the first one is a waste of time, you will be lost. And best of all the first story is not a fucking cliffhanger. Yeah Yeah, I gave it a 10 for appeal to reviewer, I am such a wimp. So a message to both of you, the hell with your lives and responsibilities,I want the next installment and I want it now..or soon.

Plot: 9 | Technical Quality: 10 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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