After seven years of hiding. Michael has to return to his hometown to take care of his father. Waking up past demons, he has to face.
Size: 107 KB (21,010 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: No Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Romantic, Fiction, Farming, Tear Jerker
Review by Safe_Bet [other reviews by Safe_Bet]
Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )
Well, okay... this was one of those "I liked it", but I wish I could have liked it more" stories because errors/editing often got in the writer's way, me thinks.
Plot: This story actually has a pretty good plot. The story line was interesting and the character interactions were not bad. I wasn't too enamored with the rather weak ending, but that might have been because of it having the predictability of most revenge/redemption genre stories.
Technical: The downside of this story was a LOT of grammatical errors which made the dialog quite stilted to my "ear". Additionally, it is pretty clear that the writer is not writing in his/her native language and it shows in some awkward word choices. In other words, a good editor would have made this "ehhh, not bad!" story into a "I'm adding this to my favorites list" story.
Appeal: In spite of the technical aspects I liked it. I guess the bottom line is that if you can overlook a few "Huh?" spots in the story, it is a fairly good romantic "revenge/redemption" story.
