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Author's Description:
Melissa and Jason on a mission to rescue themselves from my earlier story, Rescued. This is a sequel. Everyone's at risk, especially Melissa in both her iterations.
Size: 130 KB (22,741 words)
Genre: Science Fiction
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, ft/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Reluctant, BiSexual, Heterosexual, Fiction, Science Fiction, Time Travel, Incest, First

Review by Peter_H   [other reviews by Peter_H]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


The I-phone disguised space and time machine, of (so far) unknown origin. What it does ...

We get a follow-on, or rework of "Rescued" with more clues added, with a different perspective (view-point) from the original story. Except: is it different? While it repeats the theme, it also puts in a lot more famework around what happens, and finally gets around to retelling the original as seen 'through a crack behind the door'.

I am being cryptic, because I don't want to spoil anything. This is as good a sf yarn as I've seen on SOL. Read the original story first. If you can handle that, you will really like this, I predict.

Plot: 10 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 10
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