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Author's Description:
She wants his proposal and can't understand why the nerd is hesitating. After all she is a cheerleader.
Size: 20 KB (4,007 words)
Genre: Romantic
Sex Contents: Minimal Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Consensual, Romantic, Reluctant, Heterosexual, Fiction, Humor, Cheating, School

Review by Jetcrash747   [other reviews by Jetcrash747]

Reviewed: - (Review Updated: )


When is the first word of the story in RichardGerald's story 'When.'

In the tale, we meet Patty-Ann, a very loose (as in immoral) head cheerleader. We don't even learn the narrator's name for about sixteen paragraphs, which is Greg. Anyway, Patty-Ann has chosen Greg to be her husband, but Greg does not want to play her game.

The story revolves around tales of the romance of Greg and the sluttish behavior of Patty-Ann.

A two-part story The first deals with the way Patty-Ann acts toward Greg and her disrespect for his feelings. It will help if you read both novels to fully understand how RichardGerald resolved the issues that developed in the stories. 'When' is an extraordinary tale; even if you get pissed at Greg at the end of the first story, read the second one to understand better what love means.

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: 9 | Appeal to Reviewer: 8
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