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Author's Description:
Upgrade is a novel that deals with the relationship transformations of a number of characters. The plot winds through the development and daily living of a highly sexed polyamorous intentional family that develops over several years. Hot sex plays a major role in the story; there are other themes too. The sex gets detailed, hot, wet, sloppy, and sometimes repetitive; that's real life. Chapter 1 is longer than others to get the reader into the story. Not all categories appear in any one chapter.
Size: 929 KB (182,770 words)
Genre: Fiction
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/Fa, Mult, Consensual, Romantic, BiSexual, Fiction, Slut Wife, Cuckold, Wife Watching, Incest, Swinging, Group Sex, Polygamy/Polyamory, Oral Sex, Anal Sex, Fisting, Sex Toys, Pregnancy, Cream Pie, Exhibitionism, Voyeurism, Double Penetration

Review by Vitruvian Manuel   [other reviews by Vitruvian Manuel]

Reviewed:


An entertaining story from an author who is quickly distinguishing himself.

The Bad:
There is minimal conflict, and all of it is resolved quickly and without consequence. Sometimes seems like a "x gets added to the family, then y, then z" repetition.

The Good:
Most of the characters are well fleshed out, with the others remaining as background. Characters are likable. Story skips between life events over the course of several years, so it rarely gets boring.

The Last Call:
If you enjoyed Wolf's previous entries, or if you are interested in try polyamorous households with both men and women, you should read this.

--Manny

Plot: 7 | Technical Quality: N/A | Appeal to Reviewer: 9
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