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Half-sibs Ramie and Kyle think Pa is joking when he tells them they might be time travelers. And if the price of passage is letting a boy put his thing in her coochie, Ramie will pass, thank you very much. Kyle, though, can't wait. A complicated 3-way relationship with best friend Aubrey develops. Old Blackfeather has control of the situation, but their travel is all out of synch. When Kyle and Ramie discover they have become their own ancestors, a little incest doesn't seem like such a big deal
Size: 564 KB (113,032 words)
Genre: Time Travel
Sex Contents: Some Sex
Tags: mt/ft, ft/ft, Consensual, Romantic, Time Travel, Historical, Western, Brother, Sister

Review by RabbiRabbit   [other reviews by RabbiRabbit]

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I ought to have written a review of Redtail first, suffice it to say that Redtail is three tens. This probably makes Blackfeather three elevens. As great as The Godfather was/is, the sequel surpassed it; a truly rare feat, one to be savored; so to with Blackfeather. Redtail was/is incredible, great, wonderful. Blackfeather was more and the same and different and as always with Arolsav, incredibly well written, and exceptionally well edited and proofed.

Just a little time travel, just a little body snatching, just a little unbelievable and yet thoroughly believable...OK, maybe not thoroughly believable. The requirement for suspension of disbelief is minimal for some reason, maybe it is the excellent writing, the flow of the plot, or perhaps just the way the characters are drawn so that I, the reader, has been totally drawn in to live in their world.

Read Redtail first, then read Blackfeather, just be sure not to make any plans for the next couple of days. Enough, go read.

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