A deputy marshal makes a wrong step and finds himself in another world of what could have been. His education gives him a new life and his new friend are more than willing to help.
Size: 30 KB (5,950 words)
Genre: Fantasy
Sex Contents: Much Sex
Tags: Ma/ft, Consensual, Fiction, First, Oral Sex, Pregnancy, Cream Pie
Review by richardshagrin [other reviews by richardshagrin]
Reviewed:
It has been a while since I reviewed a story. But this one just appeals to me so much I needed to point it out to others. It is short but I think it is well worth reading. Ka Hmnd has a lot of stories here and all of them are good, in my opinion, which is the one that counts in this review.
It is an alternate world story, but the background isn't all that important. The hero, a Marshal, somehow gets transferred to a different world where he has skills that are important to the natives, attracts some females, and the story ends as usual with the author's stories quickly in a couple of paragraphs at the end of the story. If you like the kind of stories I have reviewed in the past you probably will like this one. Give it a try. Covid 19 probably is giving you a lot more reading time.
The plot is good but it is a short story, I can't think of a reason to give it more than an 8. I didn't see any technical errors but I don't give a 10 unless the story blows me away. Similarly it appeals to me enough to actually review it, but a 9 is certainly enough of a recommendation, I hope, for you to give it a try.
