1: Winning Numbers by Lazlong Well written, top construction and story development. Although short it is a story with a great feel about it.
2: Unique Adventures by Dark Vision Very well constructed storyline. Great research and presentation about deep water fishing. Makes me want to charter on the Lady Guinevere.
A few spelling wrong words but easily read over.
I'm looking forward to future chapters.
3: Help! by Lazlong Very well constructed.
A realistic story that deals with life using excellent wordage.
4: The Storm by just-this-guy Well constructed - realistic scenario. Seemed a bit rushed in odd places but not enough to detract.
6: Centerpiece by Daniellekitten VERY descriptive of a very sensual situation. Makes one want to try and replicate it.
7: Living Next Door to Heaven 1 by aroslav Extremely well written. Great descriptives of everything, and I don't mean just the sexy bits. A story worth re-reading.
8: That Summer by Bethany Ann Great structure - excellent writing skills. Interesting story. Look forward to more.
9: Arlene and Jeff by RoustWriter Fascinating and detailed story. LONG !!! - three days nearly solid reading but well worth it.
18: Chuck and Lisa by Dual Writer Most amazing set of stories - Florida Friends.
Recommend if you have a 4 days of 15 hours to kill.
Excellent continuity, zero spelling and grammar mistakes.
Dual Writer is a master craftsman.
