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Coming Of Age Stories/Serials

craftworks01 ๐Ÿšซ

I'm looking for recommendations for some coming of age stories/serial. I have read Burr, A Well Lived Life, Pete - A Young Man's Story.

I like these and looking for some more suggestions. Thanks

MarissaHorne ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

The Grim Reaper by rlfj.

Dance of a Lifetime byDon Lockwood.

You could consider much of Oyster50's work, particularly the Smart Girls universe, to be coming of age.

Grey Wolf ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

I'll toss my series in: Variation on a Theme by Grey Wolf.

It's a do-over, but it is strongly in the 'coming of age' category overall, albeit with the twist that the MC is doing it for the second time (but very differently, and intentionally so).

jimq2 ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

I would suggest Openbook's Kenny the Kansan series.

tendertouch ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

Ezzyb's Chaos stories.

Janna Leonard's Cassie, Hanna and Nollie

Jason Samson's Sixteen

WTSman's A Weekend to Remember

Clee Hill's The Wilhelm Scream

Aaron Stone's American Teen

Gina Marie Wylie's Tom's Diary

If you enjoy his writing style, that's a lot of what JRyter does

Lazlong's Help, Wagons Ho! and Wagons Ho! โ€” The Early Years

Rod O'Steele's My Gal Alison and probably others I'm not remembering right now.

My Protective Coloration and Charley and Claire

samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

Banadin's Richard Jackson saga (some books are elsewhere).

Several of FantasyLover's books.

A couple by SmokinDriver.

Several by Aroslav.

Several books by bluedragon.

G Younger's long series.

Summer Camp series by Nick Scipio.

"Living Two Lives" a series by Gruinard.

Hook, Pick, and Lens by Ryan Sylander.

Several long (but standalone) books by Ernest Bywater.

"A True history" series by StarFleet Carl.

A couple of series by Danny January.

tendertouch ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

Also see Svengali's Ghost's Beth books. Note that it's unfinished, and book six was a bit odd (at least to me and some others I've had contact with.) The others, though, are excellent.

FantasyLover ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

Lady in Red Trilogy by harddaysknight.

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Tazzy81 ๐Ÿšซ

@FantasyLover

Be prepared to delve into the realm of ridiculousness if your going to read the Lady in red trilogy, fair warning.

LonelyDad ๐Ÿšซ

@Tazzy81

But it is such a fun read! :-)

AmigaClone ๐Ÿšซ

@Tazzy81

That's the case with several if not most of the series mentioned.

hambarca12 ๐Ÿšซ

@Tazzy81

agreed - I had to stop 2 books in.

DBActive ๐Ÿšซ

@Tazzy81

Which ones don't wind up ridiculous? Of the ones I've read, all of them do.

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samuelmichaels ๐Ÿšซ

@DBActive

Which ones don't wind up ridiculous? Of the ones I've read, all of them do.

I think several of them end up okay, especially the ones that
end up at a transition point to adulthood (e.g. college graduation).

For instance, Gruinard's story, or Lockwood's Dance of a Lifetime.

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DBActive ๐Ÿšซ

@samuelmichaels

I haven't read Gruinard's but I think Dance of a Lifetime (a story I really disliked for several reasons) was ridiculous from the beginning to the end.

NickV ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

Have a look at the An Ordinary Sex Life series by bluedragon.

ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

Being just a simple reader, I can never understand how people can say this story is ridiculous or that story doesn't make sense when isn't that what makes a story fiction?

Did anyone ever think the reason "The Lady in Red" was ridiculous was it was written to be ridiculous and that was what made it a fun read? The only issue I had with the story was how he ended each chapter with a cliffhanger and then take months to post next chapter.

Replies:   DBActive  LonelyDad
DBActive ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

It's fiction but I think they verge into "ridiculous" territory when they become so extreme that they are pure fantasy. There has to be something tying the characters to the real world to allow a suspension of disbelief.
Some of those fantasies I enjoy (Lady in Red) is one. Others I dislike, mainly those where the "story" is just filler between scenes of theMC fucking one woman after another.

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ystokes ๐Ÿšซ

@DBActive

Others I dislike, mainly those where the "story" is just filler between scenes of theMC fucking one woman after another.

The worst is when the sex act is described in the same way each time. If you can't be creative in your story telling, then at least be creative in your fucking.

LonelyDad ๐Ÿšซ

@ystokes

A good story will establish the premise or framework early on, them build on that to tell the story. The rest of the story should support that.
This also allows the reader to make a judgement as to whether or not it will be worthwhile reading the rest of the story.

Charro6 ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

https://storyroom.com/s/11091/the-dance By https://storyroom.com/a/rooftop-herald over on the sister site Finestories

jimq2 ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

Another good, long coming of age series - Stupid Boy by G Younger.

hambarca12 ๐Ÿšซ

@craftworks01

Argon's Young Thomas Grey stories. Also his Suddenly Rich Kid

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