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Re-Visiting hymens - How deep??

Justin Case 🚫

I want to start by directing anyone to google. This is an easy way to find images and descriptions of what you don't have any idea about.

To the subject…

I know there is an article somewhere about this, but I have to get this off my chest…

I don't 'laugh' any more when I see a story where our "hero" is in the process of deflowering a 'maiden' and insets his 'penis' 2" OR MORE into her before "coming against her barrier".

Either the metric system has retarded the ability of this generation to judge length and distance, or perhaps these young ladies are severely deformed.

Of the (insert a number evidently much larger than any of these authors' conquests) virgins that I have been with, I never EVER found one that possessed a hymen over 3/4 inch from the outer edges of her labia.
(and those were girls with VERY 'puffy lips')

Is it the lack of experience in the authors, or lack of knowledge, or lack of care for factual information ??

Or maybe it is perhaps that the lack of actual 'true' virgins in existence nowadays has ribbed these authors form ever having the TASK of piercing a hymen. (Shoulder shrug)
But that is a subject for future conversations and explorations.

Any way… I just find it completely ruins the story when an author spends time describing in detail the moment a guy "sinks Three inches" into an un-plundered female before 'hitting the wall' so often.

It makes me literally wonder if I'm reading a story written by a little virgin 10 year old sitting in mom's basement typing who has never even SEEN a naked vagina in person before.
And that kills the vibe completely.

All the above was my non-concise way of making a plea to ALL authors…
Learn some simple anatomy !!!
GOOGLE has medical book illustrations if you need them.
If you don't know what you are writing about, don't write about it.

Replies: John Demille Mat Twassel awnlee jawking LupusDei akarge Finbar_Saunders mrherewriting DBActive

John Demille 🚫

@Justin Case

It's a long running trope almost. Lazeez has an article about it:

https://storiesonline.net/doc/The_Hymen

Mat Twassel 🚫

@Justin Case

Perhaps it's not the hymen but some other obstruction such as a GI Joe.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Justin Case

It makes me literally wonder if I'm reading a story written by a little virgin 10 year old sitting in mom's basement typing

Perhaps their target audience is other 10 year old virgins. Many erotic stories, if not most, contain gross exaggerations.

If you don't know what you are writing about, don't write about it.

If authors weren't allowed to tackle the unknown, fiction would be very boring. Perhaps better advice would be that if a typical reader in the target audience would know something or could easily verify it, the author should verify it for themselves.

AJ

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Switch Blayde 🚫
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@awnlee jawking

If authors weren't allowed to tackle the unknown, fiction would be very boring.

And boring to write. I forget who the famous author is, but they said the advice to "Write what you know" is wrong. They said write what you don't know. But research it so you learn something new.

DBActive 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Many erotic stories, if not most, contain gross exaggerations.

What exaggerations? There are very few stories with men who have more than the average 9-10" penis.

LupusDei 🚫

@Justin Case

Also the pain. Penetration can be painful for many reasons, but the hymen itself isn't one.

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REP 🚫

@LupusDei

but the hymen itself isn't one.

I doubt that is true.

The hymen is body tissue and it has nerves that can generate and send pain and other signals to the brain. Penetration tears the hymen and that generally results in a degree of pain or discomfort being experienced by the woman.

akarge 🚫

@Justin Case

It makes me literally wonder if I'm reading a story written by a little virgin 10 year old sitting in mom's basement typing

Hopefully, they are at least 14. Isn't the rule that no one under 14 can be involved with the sex in these stories?

😉

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REP 🚫

@akarge

no one under 14

That applies to the characters in the story.

There is nothing stopping an underage person from accessing SOL by claiming they are over 18 YO. Once they are a member, they can write and post stories.

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akarge 🚫

@REP

The winking emoji was SUPPOSED to hint that it was a joke.

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REP 🚫

@akarge

I ignore emoji symbols because they mean different things to different people. I have no idea what is going on in some person's mind when they add an emoji.

Finbar_Saunders 🚫

@Justin Case

The only way the statement about hitting an obstruction two inches into the vagina is that of having passed the actual hymen and it still being intact enough to offer a constricting obstruction. Some women are able to insert tampons for example whilst still having an "intact" hymen.

Next, let's discuss the idea of a penis penetrating the cervix!!

Replies: Switch Blayde awnlee jawking Grey Wolf

Switch Blayde 🚫

@Finbar_Saunders

Next, let's discuss the idea of a penis penetrating the cervix!!

From WebMD (a reliable medical source):

It's not possible for a penis, finger, or similarly shaped object to penetrate the cervix.

The cervix is the neck of the uterus, located at the top of the vagina. It has a small opening to allow semen to enter the uterus and to allow menstrual blood to leave the uterus. The opening is tiny and normally closed with mucus. So the cervix may be touched during sex, but it cannot be penetrated.

Ok, next topic.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Finbar_Saunders

Next, let's discuss the idea of a penis penetrating the cervix!!

I vaguely remember an article about girls working in the west coast sex industry deliberately having procedures to open their cervices to permit penile penetration.

I haven't heard anything recently so I expect they all died from nasty diseases. The cervix is tight (except during childbirth) for a good reason.

AJ

Grey Wolf 🚫

@Finbar_Saunders

I seem to recall some story where 'penetrating the cervix' was a recurring plot point. If I recall correctly, there was reason to believe biology was different/altered enough to allow that.

It always struck me as an odd fetish. That's taking 'size matters' to a new level of silly.

Replies: awnlee_jawking Dominions Son

awnlee_jawking 🚫

@Grey Wolf

'Meeting an Alien' by Duncan Mickloud matches that description.

Although it's not that common a kink (at least in the stories I've read), I wonder whether 'cervical penetration' might be worthy of its own tag.

36 SOL stories contain "penetrated her cervix".

AJ

Replies: Switch Blayde Grey Wolf Radagast

Switch Blayde 🚫

@awnlee_jawking

I wonder whether 'cervical penetration' might be worthy of its own tag.

Why propagate the myth?

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awnlee jawking 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Why propagate the myth?

Because it floats some readers' boats?

IMO it's no more mythological than some of the other tags.

AJ

Grey Wolf 🚫
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@awnlee_jawking

Wasn't that one, at least, but thanks. Maybe one of the other 36.

Searching confirms it was 'Three Square Meals' (also, Dominion's Son called it, even before I found it). There's even a mention of that being something that shouldn't happen, but a major plot element of that story is the women being changed (at, most likely, the genetic level), so anything possible when you have that. They're not really human per se, so all bets are off.

And it's a story with definite 'size matters' issues. I'm not really sure how the protagonist was able to sit comfortably, for instance. Sometimes too much of a good thing is not at all a good thing.

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Dominions Son 🚫

@Grey Wolf

I'm not really sure how the protagonist was able to sit comfortably

Space magic! :)

LupusDei 🚫

@Grey Wolf

Years ago, there was a friend of a friend of friend's sister, who interned with the emergency trauma center. One set of his go to tales was, of a man with the supposedly largest penis in the country (of two million). Both he and his partners were regular clients. I don't remember particular details, but it was all very gross.

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Grey Wolf 🚫

@LupusDei

In the case of Three Square Meals' protagonist, he is described as having four balls, each the size of an orange. That seems... problematic.

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akarge 🚫

@Grey Wolf

Yeah, and he supposedly puts out enough volume to fill a woman's stomach to the point of apparent pregnancy.

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Grey Wolf 🚫

@akarge

Yup, which also seems difficult. But, then, alien. With powers.

Radagast 🚫

@awnlee_jawking

The Snuff tag already exists.

Dominions Son 🚫

@Grey Wolf

I seem to recall some story where 'penetrating the cervix' was a recurring plot point. If I recall correctly, there was reason to believe biology was different/altered enough to allow that.

Three Square Meals fits that with both altered biology and supernatural elements.

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Grey Wolf 🚫

@Dominions Son

Yup, that was it. Thanks!

mrherewriting 🚫

@Justin Case

Wait, the hymen is real? I thought it was a metaphor for breaking down a woman's mental barrier about losing her virginity in a special way.

Wait, does this mean the clit is real?

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LonelyDad 🚫

@mrherewriting

Try not to bite your tongue while it is planted so firmly in yoour cheek!

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mrherewriting 🚫
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@LonelyDad

This topic always makes me think of the Bee Gees' song, "How Deep is Your Love?", particularly, a small section of their chorus.

How deep is your love?
I really mean to learn
'Cause we're living in a world of fools
Breaking us down

And this leads me to having to listen to their entire song, like I'm about to do right now.

DBActive 🚫

@Justin Case

While researching something else, I came across an article about this product - a fake hymen. The idea is for (primarily Muslim girls) to avoid a hymnoplasty.

VirginiaCare Advanced artificial hymen (2 pcs.) - 100% organic and sterile packaged with a practical insertion aid (disposable tweezers). A product that has been specially developed to give you the opportunity to confirm your virginity through traces of blood.

The innovative design allows for easy application, can be used at the earliest approx. 2 hours and at the latest 30 minutes before sexual intercourse. With the disposable tweezers provided, insertion is very easy and convenient.

Our VirginiaCare products are also listed in the ordering system of German pharmacies, which underlines our quality and reliability.

The special virgin blood powder included is identical to real blood, which ensures a lifelike experience.

The advantages of our products are numerous and convincing: simple, fast, safe and convenient. They cause no side effects and are non-toxic. In addition, no surgery, no pain, no needles, no anesthesia, no medication and no doctor's visits are required.

Keep the product dry to maintain its effectiveness. With a minimum shelf life of 12 months, it offers you the flexibility to use it whenever you need it.

Replies: Switch Blayde

Switch Blayde 🚫

@DBActive

Keep the product dry to maintain its effectiveness.

So if the guy eats her before he fucks her, the product won't be effective?

Replies: Dicrostonyx

Dicrostonyx 🚫

@Switch Blayde

If he did that she wouldn't need it in the first place. The kind of guy who wants physical proof of virginity in this way generally isn't thinking about his wife's sexual pleasure.

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