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Most inconsistent thing on SOL

Switch Blayde 🚫

I think the most inconsistent thing on SOL is the "sex contents" the author chooses.

Boy, do different people have different definitions.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Switch Blayde

My vote would go to the contents of the story descriptions.

AJ

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Alas, both the story coding and the descriptions issues are basically the newbie authors simply not caring about standards. The fact the average scoring for many is in the low 6's is no accident. They just don't give a damn what anyone likes. So now it's mostly old-school and who-gives-a-sh*t clans.

Replies:   fohjoffs
fohjoffs 🚫
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@Crumbly Writer

You has mistaken us (the readers) for a personage of discriminating tastes.

Mexican bandit voice: We don't need standards. I don't have to show you any stinkin standards...

Obi wan voice: Abuse The Written Force, Buck. Abuse the standards.

Yoda voice: Fucking useless, Buck is.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@fohjoffs

Beginners make mistakes by not knowing the rules, while the masters write bestsellers because they know when and how to break the rules.

It's hard to break any standards when you can still barely grasp them. Wisdom comes from experience, which can originate in schoolingβ€”creative writing classes or 'Master Writing Classes' or it comes from working your ass off and seeing what works, when, and what doesn't.

Or, put another way, you have to know the most common pitfalls to avoid repeatedly tripping over them. Reading certainly helps, yet the most valuable experience is the dearest, gained from your most painful personal failuresβ€”as it's usually impossible to forget your most humiliating mistakes. You just pay more attention after those, not wanting to be caught with your pants down again.

Switch Blayde 🚫

@awnlee jawking

My vote would go to the contents of the story descriptions.

What do you mean?

I just finished a long story that was listed as "some sex." There was no sex. No sex described, anyway. Even the off-camera sex was minimal. The description was about body swapping. Even if the story would have had some sex, the description probably wouldn't be changed. Why define the sex in the description unless you're writing a sex story (vs a story that has sex)?

Replies:   Dinsdale  awnlee jawking
Dinsdale 🚫

@Switch Blayde

"No Sex" stories are not eligible for Clitoride nominations.
I wondered if you were "talking" about Once More With Feelings - long, body swapping, not that much sex - but that one is not described as "some sex". It's also a classic!

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Dinsdale

I wondered if you were "talking" about Once More With Feelings -

It is "Swap" by Ms. Friday. A really good story, by the way.

It's a 3-part story where the first part is a strong 10. Unfortunately, the other 2 parts weren't as good.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Unfortunately, that's fairly common, as it's easier to make a broad impact with a new story, while any sequels tend to get decent, but generally declining scores.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Crumbly Writer

while any sequels tend to get decent, but generally declining scores.

Part 2 and 3 are not sequels. The MC jumps into a different person's body in Part 1. In Part 2, he jumps again, into another body. And in Part 3, he jumps into yet another body. It's a single story.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Again, I'm describing tendencies, as some stories have weaker sequels or volumes than their first, introductory book. Yet that hardly covers every single SOL story ever written.

So once again, I was talking about common trends, not about your story in particular, as it is an issue in many stories.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Crumbly Writer

So once again, I was talking about common trends, not about your story in particular,

I thought you were referring to the story I had read and commenting on in the post β€” "Swap" by Ms. Friday.

awnlee jawking 🚫
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@Switch Blayde

What do you mean?

Some of the story descriptions are irrelevant to the story contents (author bio, witty comments), some of them are direct quotes from the story but giving no clue as to the characters or plot, and some summarise the story so completely that there's no point in reading it. Those are some off the top of my head; I'm sure there are plenty more candidates. I even contributed to them because I'm rubbish at story descriptions.

Perhaps the author of your body-swapping story intended to include sex but took fright when the German exerted extra-territorial pressure over story contents and forgot to downgrade the sex contents afterwards. Have you queried the sex contents rating with the author?

AJ

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@awnlee jawking

but took fright when the German exerted extra-territorial pressure over story contents and forgot to downgrade the sex contents

Nope. The story was completed in 2011.

I stopped messaging authors for things like sex content. I never got a response for those.

So your comment that I didn't understand had to do with the inconsistency of story descriptions. That you think they're the most inconsistent thing on SOL.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Switch Blayde

So your comment that I didn't understand had to do with the inconsistency of story descriptions. That you think they're the most inconsistent thing on SOL.

That was my first thought. If I were to reconsider, there are other possibilities. Like the AI tag, which some authors refuse to use/admit.

AJ

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Sadly, for good reason. I'd rather have an author who's at least partially ashamed of not writing their own stories than one who'd openly claim they're too lazy to write their own. It's not a sin to need help, but openly declaring it in the story description, that's a bridge too far, even for newbie authors.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Crumbly Writer

I read a story today which had the AI tag. I was surprised at the number of comma splices. Surely AI ought to be able to get punctuation correct!

AJ

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫
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@awnlee jawking

I read a story today which had the AI tag.

Have you heard of Tilly Norwood? A cute actress with a social media following. On social media there are photos of her getting coffee, of her messy bedroom which fits her age, and other typical social media stuff. So much so that Hollywood agents are talking about signing her.

Why did I bring it up when you were talking about the AI tag? She's not a real person. She's an AI actress.

This is one of her Instagram videos β€” https://www.instagram.com/p/DPHLo6Rkdg0/

Replies:   awnlee jawking  ystokes
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Have you heard of Tilly Norwood?

If I haven't, I heard of similar cases.

Why did I bring it up when you were talking about the AI tag? She's not a real person. She's an AI actress.

I'm not allowed to view the video, possibly because my browser is too old.

Those who use AI to generate stories for SOL still have author credits? What acting credits does Tilly Norwood have and do any of them involve interactions with fellow thespians?

AJ

Switch Blayde 🚫
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@awnlee jawking

What acting credits does Tilly Norwood have and do any of them involve interactions with fellow thespians?

From what I read, all Tilly has done so far is build a social media following. It seems an actor spends more time promoting their movie than they do in front of the camera making the movie. Talk shows, social media, etc. So the thought is if the AI has a following, that's a plus for the movie she's (it's?) in.

Switch Blayde 🚫

@awnlee jawking

I'm not allowed to view the video, possibly because my browser is too old.

Can you view this one? It's ABC news.

https://abcnews.go.com/GMA/Culture/video/ai-generated-actress-causing-uproar-hollywood-126072506

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Switch Blayde

I can see her image but it doesn't appear to be playable.

AJ

Replies:   jimq2
jimq2 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Try this:

https://www.youtube.com/shorts/VumZe_miapI

or

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5S-oWPNnEk

ystokes 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Why did I bring it up when you were talking about the AI tag? She's not a real person. She's an AI actress.

I just read that the person who created Tilly is looking for an agent to represent her which has pissed off many actors.

What I would like to see is all clients of the agent who sings up the AI leaves the agent and if somehow someone books the AI all real actors backout of the project.

At least with CGI they tend to use real people to base it on.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@ystokes

What I would like to see is all clients of the agent who sings up the AI leaves the agent and if somehow someone books the AI all real actors backout of the project.

The creator of the AI is an actress (and comedian). She says using an AI character is no different than using an animated character in a movie. It's another form of creativity.

As to the actors who are pissed, f*ck them. They're the same people who cry that their creativity is being censored. They have big mouths until it affects them.

Replies:   ystokes
ystokes 🚫

@Switch Blayde

The creator of the AI is an actress (and comedian). She says using an AI character is no different than using an animated character in a movie. It's another form of creativity.

An animated character is still voiced by a live person, can you say the same about AI?

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@ystokes

An animated character is still voiced by a live person, can you say the same about AI?

My guess is no.

ystokes 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Since I mostly tend to read stories over 100kb.
Much sex is graphic sex in every chapter.
Some sex is every few chapters.
Min. sex is not very graphic sex only a few times.
No sex are some of the best out there.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@ystokes

Some sex is every few chapters.
Min. sex is not very graphic sex only a few times.

Interesting. One of my stories is currently set to Min sex. But my chapters are longer than my usual length so there ends up being sex every few chapters and it is fairly graphic, Tab A into Slot B etc.

I'm never quite sure about those in-between levels.

AJ

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@ystokes

No sex is often stores that don't require sex scenes to be exciting or engaging. Too often, just like when authors list every single story code, we all tend to use certain distractions to hide what we're not so good at.

red61544 🚫

@Switch Blayde

I think the most inconsistent thing is "sex contents" relative to "Tags" I've seen Minimal Sex followed by four lines of tags. I've also seen Much Sex followed by only one tag: Heterosexual.

Switch Blayde 🚫

@red61544

I think the most inconsistent thing is "sex contents" relative to "Tags"

Hmm. I guess it boils down to how the author defines sex in the story. The story that triggered this thread was defined as "some sex" and included the "masturbation" tag. But there was no masturbation in the story. There were references to characters who had masturbated, but none did it on camera. So this author considered referencing the masturbation to be sex in the story.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Again, that's not uncommon, as there are often scenes in a story where one party is merely masturbating, even in "much sex" stories. It could be a tease, it could be one simply isn't directly participating it could be someone merely admitting to masturbating over someone. Masturbating isn't as clear cut as 'anal play' is.

And I've said this before, some people just have more sensitive asses than others, so not everyone is equally inclined towards that one aspect of sexuality.

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@red61544

Some lines get cloudy in those categories. As I've always viewed most "anal" codes as being "too shy to admit they're yearning to be gay". It may not always be true, yet it's never been my first inclination to shove my dick into my lovers' asses. ;)

If they ask nicely, I'll try just about anything, but otherwise, I'm going to ask "Eh, why is it such a major concern?"

Grey Wolf 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Not just authors; also readers.

I've mentioned this before, but will mention it again: fairly early (~20 or so chapters) into publishing my first story (Variation on a Theme, Book 1) I had messages from readers saying both "'Some sex?!' There's no sex at all!" and "'Some sex?!' It's all sex! There's nothing but sex!"

At that point in publishing, there was no actual sex, per se. A bit of 'showing off' and a certain amount of fondling, but no 'actual sex'.

The first commenter was right. There was, by that definition, no sex.

The second commenter was also right. Much of the story was focused on relationships, dating, and the pursuit of hopefully-soon-to-come sex. Not all of it, to be fair, but that was the focus.

They approached it from such different perspectives, there was nothing to do but reply and assure the first commenter that there would indeed be sex, and the codes applied to the book, not the already-published chapters, while assuring the second commenter that a lot more was going to happen than simply trying to get into each other's pants.

It's inconsistent all the way down.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Grey Wolf

Coding stories is itself a pretty inconsistent standard, as there are few 'hard and fast' coding rules. Yes, lots of people are offended by "gay" "mm" stories, yet how many kids participate in mutual jerk off sessions with close friends long before ever engaging in sex? There's no actual gay sex there, yet it's at least nearing the line.

Diamond Porter 🚫

@Switch Blayde

I started writing a story that had the potential to qualify as "Much Sex." Before anything happened, most of the major characters resolved, and were adamantly not that kind of girl. So the story started to look like "No Sex." I kept sketching the story and several of the secondary characters started to resolve to be more forward. Right now, it looks like it will be "Some Sex."

I don't like to post stories as I write them, so it will get a reasonable label when I do post it. If I had started posting chapters right away, though, I would have used a different label.

I will also try to make the story description something helpful. This might be enough, though: "A girls' boarding school is forced to start admitting boys."

Replies:   awnlee jawking  Dinsdale
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Diamond Porter

This might be enough, though: "A girls' boarding school is forced to start admitting boys."

That's the inciting event but I think prospective readers need more of a clue about where you're taking the story.

AJ

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@awnlee jawking

a clue about where you're taking the story.

Like "When a girls' boarding school is forced to start admitting boys…"

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Like "When a girls' boarding school is forced to start admitting boys…"

The author intended to write a much sex story but so far it's a no-sex story. Get your mind out of the gutter! :-)

AJ

Dinsdale 🚫

@Diamond Porter

I don't like to post stories as I write them, so it will get a reasonable label when I do post it. If I had started posting chapters right away, though, I would have used a different label.

Is it possible to change labels once posting has started?

Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)

@Dinsdale

Is it possible to change labels once posting has started?

Yes.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Lazeez Jiddan (Webmaster)

Not only is it possible, but many of us delay posting certain codes, until the events actually occur.

Listing 'squicks' is one thing, yet preannouncing something which comes much later can be just as problematic for readers.

ystokes 🚫

@Switch Blayde

I am reading a story right now where I didn't notice the much sex tag and the first 6-7 chapter had no sex, and I was really enjoying hoping for a love story between the two MC's. Now it is becoming an orgy story between the male MC and every woman he meets.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@ystokes

the first 6-7 chapter had no sex

That's what the "slow" tag is for. But I don't use the "slow" tag because I can't bring myself to say my story starts out slow. There may not be sex, but I sure hope anyone reading it won't think it's slow.

Replies:   ystokes
ystokes 🚫

@Switch Blayde

That's what the "slow" tag is for. But I don't use the "slow" tag because I can't bring myself to say my story starts out slow. There may not be sex, but I sure hope anyone reading it won't think it's slow.

I am not talking about your story. The story I am talking about started out looking like a love story between a boy and a girl. But now in the last number of chapters it has him either wanting to screw or screwing every girl and/or woman he meets. It's my fault because I didn't read the tags.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@ystokes

I am not talking about your story.

I didn't think you were. I was giving my opinion of the "slow" tag (which you didn't even mention). I guess that tag rubs me wrong. Sorry.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Switch Blayde

I think that's another tag which has more than one meaning, which is obviously somewhat confusing. Or, it could just be about a 'slow' kid, fumbling through life.

4bfny1l3kixg0sf84ji 🚫

@Switch Blayde

As learned in I.T. (and likely many other areas..)

The wonderful thing about standards...
... is that there are so many to choose from!

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@4bfny1l3kixg0sf84ji

The wonderful thing about standards...
... is that there are so many to choose from!

Take the USB.

USB stands for Universal Serial Bus, an industry standard for connecting devices and transferring data and power between them.

It was so successful at providing a single standard that there's now at least half a dozen variants. The EU is in the process of standardising on USB-C for the recharging of electrical devices.

AJ

Pixy 🚫

@Switch Blayde

It's inevitable. The more people strike and demand things, the more employers will look for cheaper, less hassle alternatives, and to be honest, Hollywood has a pretty big target on it's digital head.

Look at how many films have been screwed before release, by the very same 'stars' of those films. And no one knows that more than the poor unfortunates that had to work with Rachel Zegler, the poster child of career suicide.

Producers and money people want stars who look good, and don't open their mouths to say anything other than what has been scripted for them. I would be very worried about job security if I was a young acting person. It's going to be AI pretty soon.

Replies:   Argon  Crumbly Writer
Argon 🚫

@Pixy

And here I thought, movie producers are looking for actresses they can diddle and coerce into having sex with them. AI? Not so much.

Replies:   Pixy
Pixy 🚫

@Argon

And here I thought, movie producers are looking for actresses they can diddle and coerce into having sex with them

I don't think that will ever go away. Young easily impressionable girls will always think that they are the next 'starlet' and there will always be men preying on them, with promises of them being in the next film, only to come up with excuse after excuse as to why it never happens, film after film ("It required a woman of X colour", "or a woman of a certain height/ethnicity" "But don't worry, the next film will be yours...")

And it's not just mainstream movie land. It's always been a case that 'failed' mainstream movie actors often turn to porn movies as a way to 'pay the bills'. But even that's taking a hit. There is so much user generated content out there in the form of Onlyfans and chat rooms where couples willingly play together for a paying audience, that the main porn studios are going broke. All they have left is extreme content that the average woman will not contemplate, like sleeping with 400 men in 24hrs etc etc). I think the only reason porn producers have not gone full AI, is that the programmers cost more to hire than an actual, desperate actress who thinks this film 'Will be the one that lifts her out of porn into the mainstream..'

And as the porn consumers become de-sensitised to the sheer variety and content of porn (How long till the novelty of the likes of Bonnie Blue sleeping with a 1000 men wears off, before consumers start looking for the next novelty?) then the more extreme acts are going to become 'normal'. Very much in the same way a drug user has to keep increasing the dosage in order to chase that original high. Eventually it's going to get to the stage where the majority of actual porn actresses go "Nah, no chance." And the content producers turn to AI to provide the extreme content the consumers demand.

Replies:   Big Ed Magusson
Big Ed Magusson 🚫

@Pixy

The alternative is that some of the audience decides that quality matters and walks away from the crap you can get on PornHub to pay for stuff that's actually good.

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Pixy

That's their main objective, having AI play characters who are already dead and buried years and years ago. Why stop churning out profits, especially if you needn't pay out any royalties to the deceased's family.

But just because the producers don't have any morals, viewers and actors DO (at least occasionally)!

Replies:   ystokes
ystokes 🚫

@Crumbly Writer

especially if you needn't pay out any royalties to the deceased's family.

They couldn't do it without the heir's permission. They own the rights to the image and name. And without permission I would hope SAG would not allow other members to work it.

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@ystokes

Except, there were specific exceptions carved out of the AI guidelines in the U.S., which as the main literary and movie force, carried over everywhere else, exempting such egregious actions. It was only recently, once the Americans essentially tarnished its reputation across the board on all of those fronts, that the European Union finally responded, countering those guidelines across the board throughout Europe.

Of course, America refused, yet most media companies, finally seeing the writing on the wall and our countries overall decline, also capitulated. Especially since those media have been failing in America as well.

Even now, actions have consequences, especially where financing is concerned since our 'rule of law' is pretty much merely a forlorn memory at this point.

Dominions Son 🚫

@ystokes

They couldn't do it without the heir's permission. They own the rights to the image and name. And without permission I would hope SAG would not allow other members to work it.

SAG got pissed off, because the family of James Earl Jones made a deal for AI use of his Darth Vader performances without going through SAG.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Dominions Son

Yeah, now that you mention it, that is how this whole thing first started.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@Crumbly Writer

Yeah, now that you mention it, that is how this whole thing first started.

SAG doesn't care about the AI use of James Earl Jones' voice and image, they are pissed off because they didn't get a cut of the deal.

Replies:   ystokes
ystokes 🚫

@Dominions Son

SAG doesn't care about the AI use of James Earl Jones' voice and image, they are pissed off because they didn't get a cut of the deal.

The funny thing is, SAG still have to process the residual checks as I am sure the heirs still get in the deal.

akarge 🚫

@Switch Blayde

This (Tilly Norwood/AI actress) is actually an OLD concept. Remember the movie "Looker"?

Replies:   ystokes
ystokes 🚫

@akarge

This (Tilly Norwood/AI actress) is actually an OLD concept. Remember the movie "Looker"?

Didn't they still need a live person for the motion capture and for the voice over.

Replies:   akarge
akarge 🚫

@ystokes

Yeah, AT FIRST, but then they had enough info that they could just replace her and let the computer make the new stuff. Of course, then they notice longer needed here around, and they didn't want to pay her, for her likeness...

4bfny1l3kixg0sf84ji 🚫

@Switch Blayde

re: AI (re-?)generated characters..
A number of years back, there was a little kerfuffle over Brandon Lee and the movie The Crow (2?)...

Replies:   Pixy
Pixy 🚫

@4bfny1l3kixg0sf84ji

A number of years back, there was a little kerfuffle over Brandon Lee and the movie The Crow (2?)...

And then there was Oliver reed, who was glad he ate her.

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