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Boaty McSadface

awnlee jawking 🚫

In British English:

The plural of 'craft', meaning skilled hand manufacturing (eg knitting, embroidery, wood carving) is 'crafts'.

The plural of 'craft', meaning a transportation vessel (eg boat, plane, spaceship, drone) is 'craft'.

Do other variants of English differ?

AJ

The Outsider 🚫

@awnlee jawking

I think, in American English, the plural of the knitting, embrodery, etc., is often reduced to 'a craft,' but don't quote me on that...

I barely speak American English so good...

Replies:   REP  Crumbly Writer
REP 🚫

@The Outsider

Adding 'a' prior to 'craft' makes craft singular.

Replies:   The Outsider
The Outsider 🚫
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@REP

Like I said, I don't speak English so good… (I passed high school, but didn't get much further… Too many years working 911 EMS probably didn't help, either…)

Replies:   julka
julka 🚫

@The Outsider

If you are good at embroidery and make multiple pieces of art, you have made several crafts and are a master of a craft.

If you are good at embroidery, and woodcarving, and origami, you are a master of several crafts.

The Outsider 🚫

@julka

Thanks...

The only craft I was ever good at was picking people up and dropping them off...

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@julka

A crafty master craftsman mastering multiple crafts, craftily!

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@The Outsider

That's more of a category, but yes, American English supports the same plural usage of "crafts".

akarge 🚫

@awnlee jawking

I think AJ's version seems correct in American English.

Replies:   jimq2
jimq2 🚫

@akarge

Yep. That is the common usage.

Switch Blayde 🚫

@awnlee jawking

The plural of 'craft', meaning a transportation vessel (eg boat, plane, spaceship, drone) is 'craft'.

I never knew that.
And I already forgot it. If that ever comes up in my writing, which I doubt, I will do it wrong. That is a stupid, stupid rule.

Replies:   julka  Crumbly Writer
julka 🚫

@Switch Blayde

You might do it right without realizing, actually! It looks odd because in this context "craft" usually has a prefix - if you see two fixed wing gliders and a biplane, would you say that there are three aircraft, or three aircrafts?

Switch Blayde 🚫

@julka

would you say that there are three aircraft, or three aircrafts?

Yeah, "aircraft."

awnlee jawking 🚫
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@julka

If the planes were all from a certain manufacturer, I might ask the owner, "How many Beechcrafts do you own?" In that context, to me 'Beechcraft' feels less right than 'Beechcrafts'.

ETA - from the horse's mouth, and despite Google AI's best attempts to thwart me, it's 'Beechcrafts'.

AJ

Replies:   Argon  Crumbly Writer  julka
Argon 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Making necklaces out of shells is one of the beach crafts, too.

Sorry, won't happen again.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@Argon

Sorry, won't happen again.

Shame :-)

AJ

Replies:   jimq2
jimq2 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Sounds like we have been infested with punatics.

Dominions Son 🚫

@jimq2

Sounds like we have been infested with punatics.

File a complaint with the Grand Punsil of Punnsylvania and they may pun-ish the offenders. :)

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@jimq2

Punatics are quite literally puntastic!

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Argon

I live at the beach. It does happen, as do beachgrass necklaces, , painted turtle shells and of course plaster casts of footprints in the sand, sand glass (broken glass bottles which have been worn by the sand and waves, and the one my brother does quite well with, fulgurites (crystalized sand lightning strikes).

Though nowadays, much of it's done commercially, rather than by artistic craftsmen who are more interested in larger artworks they can charge more for, rather than 'hobby crafts'. And kids selling such things has gone the way of lemonade stands, largely due to local communities requiring a commercial license for kids earning mere pocket change. :(

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Actually, it's more common to refer to the type of aircraft: biplane, plane, jet, fighter, fighter jet, crop duster, etc. So "I have three Beechcrafts" means you ONLY have Beechcrafts, which is so similar to Beach crafts (painted shells, artful collections of seagrasses—the one's on the beach, not the underwater ones, etc.), it makes my poor wittle brain hurt.

julka 🚫

@awnlee jawking

In that context, to me 'Beechcraft' feels less right than 'Beechcrafts'.

I don't know why you're bringing this up. If you want an explanation of how proper nouns work in english, feel free to ask. I'll probably suggest you read a textbook.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@julka

Still, it is a fairly common mistake, which most SOL authors just haven't considered. Hell, I had to teach myself grammar, punctuation and whole host of other details before I ever write my first story, long before I even considered posting here.

Most just dive in, without ever considering how much they don't actually know. While that's always my starting point, often with each new story, as there's always a TON I don't know about any subject, so total ignorance is my default assumption.

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Again, crafts is the plural of 'artful skills', while craft means vessel. Thus the plural of those vessels is … craft. You gotta have some way of telling them apart. Now, if your craft is constructing craft, while someone else's is constructing crafts, you can leave multiple readers scratching their heads.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Crumbly Writer

Thus the plural of those vessels is … craft.

Which is what makes no sense to me. The aircraft being plural does, but not the standalone craft. When I run into a situation like that, when it sounds awful to my ear, I rearrange the sentence to avoid it.

Michael Loucks 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Do not try to make any sense of English! You'll only hurt your brain!
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awnlee jawking 🚫
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@Michael Loucks

Do not try to make any sense of English! You'll only hurt your brain!

I think you previously posted something about how many exceptions there are to the 'rules' of English. I had that in mind when I posted this. And I'd recently come across a couple of instances that grated with what I'd been taught - one story mentioned crafts in a harbour and another used aircrafts when in the context of presidential planes.

AJ

garymrssn 🚫

@awnlee jawking

The Americans took exception to English back in the late seventeen hundreds and continues to this day. ;)

Replies:   The Outsider
The Outsider 🚫

@garymrssn

"Two nations separated by a common language..." - Winston Churchill

And, the "Boston Accent?" Sounds a lot like UK English...

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@The Outsider

Hah! UK English? Try wandering around London some, there are SO many regional accents in a very small locale, you can't tell whether you're coming or going. Yet, that's what makes it so fun. I haven't been back in a long time, yet I can still mostly identify where each London accent originates. It's kinda like roundabout, if you don't know what you're doing, watch out!

Michael Loucks 🚫

@awnlee jawking

one story mentioned crafts in a harbour and another used aircrafts when in the context of presidential planes.

If you put a modified on it, such as 'small' it doesn't take the 's' plural:

aircraft
smallcraft
witchcraft
tradecraft
statecraft
mastercraft

But:
arts and crafts

Replies:   samuelmichaels
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@Michael Loucks

If you put a modified on it, such as 'small' it doesn't take the 's' plural:

aircraft
smallcraft
witchcraft
tradecraft
statecraft
mastercraft

But:
arts and crafts

Aircraft and smallcraft refer to vehicles, and are the same form for both singular and plural.

Witchcraft, tradecraft, statecraft, and mastercraft are skilled practices, each one in a singular form. It's possible but non-sensical to make them plural; it only works when you refer to multiple different skilled practices, which is the case in "arts and *crafts*".

Or in other words exactly as AJ described the usage.

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@Michael Loucks

No, that's trying to make sense of Shakespearian verse. English evolves all on it's own accord, as it's a 'living language'.

Replies:   Michael Loucks
Michael Loucks 🚫

@Crumbly Writer

Once again, completely (and I say intentionallY) trying to make me say something I did not say.

I said NOTHING about Shakespeare. I was speaking about modern English. Period.

jimq2 🚫

@awnlee jawking

There is an expression that fits here. "The exception proves the rule." And in English, there are more exceptions than not.

irvmull 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Those are two different words, just spelled the same, thanks to English.

I suppose it could also be blamed on sailors, they have lots of words with unusual meanings. Some, like "knots" have a rational explanation. For some others, its a reach, like back, bend, fix, head, heel, jury...

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@irvmull

Even worse, sometimes words have multiple roots, like mixing Ancient Roman prefixes, old Gaelic terms and Ancient Greek suffixes. As each has a different meaning, form, usage and structure. (I spend a LOT of time studying etymologies.)

ian_macf 🚫

@awnlee jawking

And then there's "year" and "years" as in

"My car, 16 years old" and "My 16 year old car"

Ian

jimq2 🚫

@ian_macf

"My car, 16 years old" and "My 16 year old car"

And spell checker keeps trying to correct the latter example.

Replies:   The Outsider
The Outsider 🚫

@jimq2

Does yours keep asking you if you want to add hyphens, too?

Replies:   jimq2
jimq2 🚫

@The Outsider

Yep.

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@jimq2

Yep, problem is, whether you use hyphens is determined by context, so the 'add hyphen' question is a page-setting, setting, so it'll know where to cut sentences in an attempt to save a page or two over the course of a full novel. Yet I prefer leaving my sentences and words intact rather than playing games, since I most sell eBooks anyway, where page count doesn't matter. However, for print books, page count significantly affects book cost/profitability.

awnlee jawking 🚫

@ian_macf

"My car, 16 years old" and "My 16 year old car"

I don't know how reliable the source is but one site reckons:

Hyphenate when the phrase functions as an adjective before a noun (e.g., "two-year-old daughter," "six-week-old puppy") or when it functions as a noun (e.g., "he behaves like a four-year-old," "the 10-year-old was staring"). Don't hyphenate when the phrase is used as an adjective after the noun.

AJ

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Or when it's "She's four years old," when there's no need to hyphenate. Again, for every rule, there are usually many more exceptions.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Crumbly Writer

Or when it's "She's four years old," when there's no need to hyphenate. Again, for every rule, there are usually many more exceptions.

'She' is the noun. The phrase follows the noun. Not an exception.

AJ

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@awnlee jawking

As usual, I was making a point, not addressing the latest post. I've got a multi-track ADD brain, the worst of both worlds.

Switch Blayde 🚫

@ian_macf

"My car, 16 years old" and "My 16 year old car"

The latter should be "16-year-old" with hyphens. It's an adjective to the noun "car."

Replies:   ian_macf
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@Switch Blayde

Well Sir Winston Churchill once wrote

One must regard the hyphen as a blemish to be avoided wherever possible

I agree with him (at least on this). I would never use a hyphen in this context.

Ian

Switch Blayde 🚫

@ian_macf

I would never use a hyphen in this context.

Then you're not following the rules of compound adjectives. Google "compound adjective" and you'll find how the hyphens are used with them. The following is from dictionary.com which was the first one in the search results (actually Grammarly came first, but the dictionary.com one is clearer).

A compound adjective is an adjective that is made up of multiple individual words. Usually, the words are connected by a hyphen or hyphens when used as an adjective. Words like absent-minded and happy-go-lucky are examples of compound adjectives.

Besides the potential use of hyphens, compound adjectives act the same as any other adjectives: they are used to modify nouns and pronouns, and they often appear directly before the word that they modify.

Sometimes, a writer may not use hyphens when using a compound adjective. Instead, they may use quotation marks or italics to indicate they are using multiple words together as a compound adjective. For example,

Nobody liked Jake and his "holier than thou" attitude.

Replies:   awnlee jawking  ian_macf
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Nobody liked Jake and his "holier than thou" attitude.

If I were to use quotes in that situation, I'd be worried about the reader being able to discern whether it was intended as sarcasm.

AJ

Replies:   Crumbly Writer
Crumbly Writer 🚫

@awnlee jawking

That's when you use 'alternating quotes', switching between single and double quotations based on the context. Yet, if the term is either stated or quoted, then you'd use double quote it, only using single quotes when you're referring to concepts or common noteworthy phrases (adages).

So, if you're writing about Shakespeare or his works, you'd put "To be or not to be" in double quotes, yet when referencing the phrase concerning something else entirely, you'd us alternate quotation marks to denote is wasn't a direct quote, taken from his works.

Say, if you were to write 'To be or not to be an overly pedantic tuna-fish sandwich'.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫
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@Crumbly Writer

If you use double quotes for direct speech and single quotes for quotations, what alternate set would you use for compound adjectives/adjectival phrases?

AJ

Replies:   Michael Loucks
Michael Loucks 🚫

@awnlee jawking

If you use double quotes for direct speech and single quotes for quotations, what alternate set would you use for compound adjectives/adjectival phrases?

I put interior quotations in italics, in addition to the single quote, given it has double-duty. I use "" (guillemot ) for foreign language quotes.

ian_macf 🚫
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@Switch Blayde

I don't use Google search. But I did do a search, and the third hit was as follows

A compound adjective is formed when two or more words are combined to modify a noun, often using hyphens to clarify their relationship, such as "well-known" or "high-speed." These adjectives help provide more specific descriptions in writing.

As I said, I would not use hyphens in that specific context as IMHO it is not necessary to clarify their relationship.

YMMV

Ian

Crumbly Writer 🚫

@ian_macf

You're confounding two different hyphen usages. A compound, multi-word adjective is typically always hyphenated. It's the paragraph hyphenations which are the bigger issue.

However, it's also entirely possible that Sir Churchill simply preferred avoiding multi-word adjectives entirely, and thus simply stuck to single word adjectives. But it'd take a fairly deep-dive into his writings (i.e. his personal letters) to determine this, as like many, his Autobiography was likely 'polished' by someone else.

Some famous figures were notoriously literate—writing often and fluently—while others stuck to the basic facts without embellishing much. So to justify the publishing contract, publishers aren't shy about professional 'embellishments' by trained editors/ghostwriters or collaborators—like wives, mistresses or lovers (both sexes).

I'm not implying anything about Winston himself, yet these things do happen. How often is never very clear (i.e. anonymous), yet ghostwriting is a highly lucrative profession for a reason. While Sir Win was a very eloquent speaker and an active letter-writer too.

Again, no two writers ever write the same way as any other. They may follow similar styles, yet everyone is uniquely themselves, except for those who are paid to sound like someone else. ;)

Replies:   solitude
solitude 🚫

@Crumbly Writer

However, it's also entirely possible that Sir Churchill simply preferred avoiding multi-word adjectives entirely, and thus simply stuck to single word in adjectives.

Churchill was known for using 'gutty' language rather than 'intestinal' phraseology, so I think you are right in your assumption: avoid compound-noun adjectives that need hyphens, rather than skipping the hyphens in compound-noun adjectives.

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