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pcfisherman 🚫

Anyone have good old west stories?

Replies:   Switch Blayde  ian181
Switch Blayde 🚫
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@pcfisherman

No, but just curious and since you like Westerns I'll ask you.

I'm writing a story that takes place in the Old West. Has a rancher, a one-room school, saloon, horses, Stetsons, etc., but it's not a Western. I just made that the time period, but it's not like a cowboy book or a cow rancher vs a goat rancher or a fast gun.

So the question is (actually two questions):

1. Would that be considered a Western genre or simply a story code of Western?

2. If you were looking for a Western story like you currently are, if you searched on Western and found this story that takes place in the Old West but isn't a typical Western, would you be disappointed?

Thanks.

Replies:   qqqq
qqqq 🚫

@Switch Blayde

go for it....you know there will be a lot of coments when you post...good luck

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@qqqq

go for it....you know there will be a lot of coments when you post...good luck

I was just wondering if it is considered a Western simply because it takes place in the Old West. As it turns out, it'll end up being more of a Western than I originally thought so my question (for this story) is moot, but I'm curious about the answer anyway.

ian181 🚫

@pcfisherman

This is a pretty good series.https://storiesonline.net/universe/597/the-trilogy-and-more-western-universe

kimlsevier 🚫

Aubie56 has multiple Western series

Ernest Bywater 🚫

Here's some author links and story links:

https://storiesonline.net/a/jryter

https://storiesonline.net/a/aubie56

https://storiesonline.net/universe/491/somewhere-in-time-sagas

https://storiesonline.net/s/75867/lucky-jim

https://storiesonline.net/s/54551/toms-adventures

https://storiesonline.net/s/50644/gunslinger

https://storiesonline.net/s/16691/boone-the-early-years

https://storiesonline.net/s/13358/stand-in-time

https://storiesonline.net/s/13144/will-to-survive

https://storiesonline.net/s/18750/the-baldwins-from-texas

https://storiesonline.net/s/16104/brady-and-berta-boyd

https://storiesonline.net/s/10364/coming-home-to-la-petite-valley

https://storiesonline.net/s/63806/peaceful-valley

https://storiesonline.net/s/59900/the-gun

https://storiesonline.net/s/66339/saga-of-sam-jones

https://storiesonline.net/s/13765/community-service

Replies:   LonelyDad
LonelyDad 🚫

@Ernest Bywater

You missed 'Escape from Lexington' also by Fantasy Lover.

Replies:   Ernest Bywater
Ernest Bywater 🚫

@LonelyDad

You missed 'Escape from Lexington' also by Fantasy Lover.

I knew there was another favorite I couldn't remember. Probably a couple of others as well. But the list as is should keep the OP busy for an hour or two.

Dinsdale 🚫

Jay Cantrell's https://storiesonline.net/s/62738/the-hillside

One comment on Ernest Bywater's list: the last entry - Community Service - is a time-travel western, one of a set of three I believe.

Argon 🚫

El Paso by Joe J.
it involves time travel.
https://storiesonline.net/s/52784/el-paso-joe-j

Lazlong's Wagons Ho!
https://storiesonline.net/s/44905/wagons-ho
and its sequel.

I also wrote one myself:
His Lucky Charm
https://storiesonline.net/s/65806/his-lucky-charm

jessicajamesgo 🚫

https://storiesonline.net/s/19625/frontiers

Nulaak83 🚫

Randl mentioned HDK's second best western but didn't include his first. It's a solid story even though the female lead is a bit over the top with her stereotypical western female obnoxiousness. I'm surprised nobody mentioned Split Tails Ranch either as imo it's a better story than a lot of the ones linked above. I'd definitely recommend Tom's Adventure linked above as well. If the writer cleaned it up with some editing it would be one of the best stories on the site.

https://storiesonline.net/s/49877/in-my-life
https://storiesonline.net/s/18324/split-tails-ranch

Jason Samson 🚫

I coded my Backcountry as historical and western, even though it is set in the east, long before the conventional "Wild West" etc.

Nobody complained about the coding.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Jason Samson

historical and western, even though it is set in the east, long before the conventional "Wild West"

I can see "historical," but why did you code it as "western" if it's not?

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@Switch Blayde

I can see "historical," but why did you code it as "western" if it's not?

I can see "western" if the story takes place on the western frontier of a younger United States.

There would be some cultural differences from a classical western, but they would be quite similar.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@Dominions Son

I can see "western" if the story takes place on the western frontier of a younger United States.

But it takes place in the east.

Replies:   Tw0Cr0ws  Dominions Son
Tw0Cr0ws 🚫

@Switch Blayde

200 years ago Ohio was the wild west, as was Alabama.

Dominions Son 🚫
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@Switch Blayde

But it takes place in the east.

In what is now considered the east, but was at one time (the time in which as I understand it, the story in question was set) the western frontier.

The traditional setting of Most westerns, the area that eventually became California, Nevada, Utah, Arizona, about half of New Mexico and bits of Colorado and Wyoming we didn't even get from Mexico until 1848, not even two decades before the Civil War.

From around the end of the revolutionary war to 1812 (Louisianan Purchase), and possibly later (if you go by admission of the states rather than acquisition of territory further to the west), most of the area from the Appalachian mountains west to the Mississippi River would have been the western frontier of the US.

Those states were admitted to the union at various dates between 1800 and 1850. Not counting West Virgina*, Wisconsin was the last state west of the Mississippi to be admitted to the Union in 1848

Switch Blayde 🚫

@Dominions Son

In what is now considered the east, but was at one time (the time in which as I understand it, the story in question was set) the western frontier.

But the Western genre (as defined by wikipedia) is:

Western is a genre of fiction which tell stories set primarily in the latter half of the 19th century in the American Old West

So even it was the western frontier of what we now know as the east, it's not a Western.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Unless it's set 'A long time ago in a galaxy far, far away'.

Wikipedia's wrong (colour me surprised) - its definition is too limited. Westerns are defined either by locale and/or by ethos.

AJ

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@awnlee jawking

Wikipedia's wrong (colour me surprised) - its definition is too limited.

Don't know about that.

Western, a genre of novels and short stories, motion pictures, and television and radio shows that are set in the American West, usually in the period from the 1850s to the end of the 19th century.

https://www.britannica.com/art/western

Western. Western novels tell the stories of cowboys, settlers, and outlaws exploring the western frontier and taming the American Old West. They're shaped specifically by their genre-specific elements and rely on them in ways that novels in other fiction genres don't.

https://www.masterclass.com/articles/what-are-the-different-genres-of-literature-a-guide-to-14-literary-genres#the-14-main-literary-genres

Westerns. These books are specifically set in the old American West. Plotlines include survival, romance, and adventures with characters of the time, for example, cowboys, frontiersmen, Indians, mountain men, and miners.

https://writerswrite.co.za/the-17-most-popular-genres-in-fiction-and-why-they-matter/

Western is a literature, film, and television genre. Westerns are primarily set in the American Old West between the late eighteenth century and late nineteenth century and tell the stories of cowboys, settlers, and outlaws exploring the western frontier and taming the Wild West.

https://www.masterclass.com/articles/what-is-a-western-novel-definition-of-the-western-genre-and-tips-for-writing-a-great-western-book

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Well, if those are the experts of your choice.

I prefer Wikipedia.

'Star Wars' was based on John Ford's 'The Searchers', but I believe it's an 'ethos' western, like 'Westworld', 'Buck Rogers' etc. Ethos westerns can also be set in eg Japan, Korea, Australia, South America etc.

AJ

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫

@awnlee jawking

'Star Wars' was based on John Ford's 'The Searchers', but I believe it's an 'ethos' western, like 'Westworld', 'Buck Rogers' etc. Ethos westerns can also be set in eg Japan, Korea, Australia, South America etc.

Well, there are Argentina guacho and Australian Outback offshoots of Westerns, but they're not Westerns, as in the Western genre.

Replies:   awnlee jawking
awnlee jawking 🚫

@Switch Blayde

Well, there are Argentina guacho and Australian Outback offshoots of Westerns, but they're not Westerns, as in the Western genre.

Oh well, it's agree to disagree time ;)

AJ

richardshagrin 🚫

@Dominions Son

Not counting West Virgina*, Wisconsin was the last state west of the Mississippi to be admitted to the Union in 1848

I suspect the asterisk after West Virginia is because all its area was part of the Union well before 1848. It was part of Virgina, one of the original 13 states. And it isn't west of the Mississippi River. Maybe east of the Mississippi was the author's intention also concerning Wisconsin.

The Territory of Wisconsin was much larger than the State turned out to be. The Territory did extend beyond the Mississippi River (to the west of it). But the parts west of the river were not part of the State.

Dominions Son 🚫
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@richardshagrin

Maybe east of the Mississippi was the author's intention also concerning Wisconsin.

Yep, that was a typo, should have been east of the Mississippi.

West Virginia is a bit more complicated. When Virginia Seceded from the union to join the Confederacy, West Virginia seceded from Virginia to stay with the Union. West Virginia was granted state hood in 1863, during the Civil War.

Replies:   Tw0Cr0ws
Tw0Cr0ws 🚫

@Dominions Son

When Virginia Seceded from the union to join the Confederacy, West Virginia seceded from Virginia to stay with the Union. West Virginia was granted state hood in 1863, during the Civil War.

Though not legal under the U.S. Constitution it was still allowed to occur.

Replies:   Dominions Son  oldegrump
Dominions Son 🚫
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@Tw0Cr0ws

Though not legal under the U.S. Constitution it was still allowed to occur.

Actually, no, it wasn't barred by the US Constitution, even as a technicality.

The constitution bars creating a new state from the territory of another state (without the original state's consent).

However, at the time that West Virginia was granted state hood, Virginia was a Confederate state, not a US state. The constitutional provision described above simply didn't apply.

The southern states seceded in 1860. The Civil War started in 1861. West Virginia was granted statehood in 1863. The Civil war didn't end until 1868.

Replies:   richardshagrin  Tw0Cr0ws
richardshagrin 🚫

@Dominions Son

The Civil war didn't end until 1868.

"On August 20, 1866, in acknowledgement of Texas' new state government, Johnson was able to finally proclaim that "said insurrection is at an end and that peace, order, tranquility, and civil authority now exist in and throughout the whole United States of America." His proclamation may have meant that the Civil War, by any definition, was finally overβ€”but the arduous process of Reconstruction was only beginning."

Not sure why Dominions Son picked 1868 as the end of the war.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@richardshagrin

Not sure why Dominions Son picked 1868 as the end of the war.

Typo and/or misread the source I was looking the time-line up from.

In any case, 1863 is still in the middle of the civil war, so the error in the year it ended doesn't affect the point I was making.

Tw0Cr0ws 🚫

@Dominions Son

However, at the time that West Virginia was granted state hood, Virginia was a Confederate state, not a US state. The constitutional provision described above simply didn't apply.

This argument gives credibility to the claims that the Civil War was a war of conquest of a foreign nation, not putting down an insurrection.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@Tw0Cr0ws

This argument gives credibility to the claims that the Civil War was a war of conquest of a foreign nation, not putting down an insurrection.

Arguably it was both.

On the one side you have states purporting to have seceded from the Union and to have formed a new nation. On the other hand you have the Union government saying, no, you can't do that.

As to the issue of West Virginia's admission to the Union, only the people / government of Virginia would have had standing to object. However, The people/government of Virginia were the one's claiming to have left the union.

To make the claim that the admission of West Virginia was in violation of the US constitution, Virginia would have had to admit (at the time) that their secession was invalid.

oldegrump 🚫

@Tw0Cr0ws

Though not legal under the U.S. Constitution it was still allowed to occur.

I believe that when texas was admitted to the union it was allowed to split up to five ways, it never happened, but it could have. The U. P. of michigan has had several petition drives to secede from Michigan and become the state of Superior. It could happen, and in my reading of the constitution, I find no prohibition of that action.

Replies:   Tw0Cr0ws  Dominions Son
Tw0Cr0ws 🚫

@oldegrump

There is a story that when the Alaskan pipeline was being built a lot of Texans went up to work on it, and being Texans they had to brag about how big Texas is, finally the Alaskans got tired of this and told the Texans that if they didn't shut up about it the Alaskans would divide Alaska into two states and make Texas the third largest state.

Dominions Son 🚫

@oldegrump

I believe that when texas was admitted to the union it was allowed to split up to five ways, it never happened, but it could have.

It's a different issue when a new state is admitted to the union.

The constitution only prohibits creating a new state from the territory of an existing state without the approval of the state the territory is taken from.

In the west ward expansion, when territories gained state hood it was not unusual for a territory to be carved up and some of the territory given to an existing state or to other territories seeking statehood in the same time frame.

Virginia claimed not to be a US state at the time West Virginia was was admitted, which is why there wasn't a constitutional issue.

The U. P. of michigan has had several petition drives to secede from Michigan and become the state of Superior.

Even assuming that they were allowed to secede from Michigan, Superior could not become a US state without sign-off from the Michigan legislature.

PotomacBob 🚫

@richardshagrin

The Territory of Wisconsin was much larger than the State turned out to be

I have faint recollection of hearing about a U.S. Supreme Court case involving a territorial boundary dispute - maybe between Ohio and Michigan. Michigan lost the case, but the Supreme Court in its order gave Michigan a consolation prize of the Upper Peninsula - taking it from Wisconsin. I may have the details wrong.

Replies:   oldegrump  Dominions Son
oldegrump 🚫

@PotomacBob

No Michigan won, Ohio got Toledo

Dominions Son 🚫

@PotomacBob

have faint recollection of hearing about a U.S. Supreme Court case involving a territorial boundary dispute - maybe between Ohio and Michigan.

It wasn't a court case at any level, even the Supreme court wouldn't have the power to carve up territories like that.

The US state of Ohio and the territory of Michigan kind of fought a war over Toledo. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Toledo_War

The US Congress, which did/does have the authority to alter territorial (but not state) boundaries intervened, and proposed granting Michigan state hood and 3/4ths of the UP in exchange for Michigan giving up it's claim on Toledo.

Ernest Bywater 🚫

While I didn't specifically look into the reasons justifying the new state of West Virginia being approved back then, what little research of source documents I did look at made it look like the creation of the state of West Virginia was proposed by the citizens of the counties involved and when the matter was put before Congress the only representatives for Virginia on hand were the Virginia state legislature members for the counties wanting to be West Virginia and they gave approval on behalf of the Virginia Legislature and the Virginia Federal Representatives who couldn't be present. Thus the vote was approved as per the US Constitution.

Radagast 🚫

When Zane Grey went looking for new horizons he headed to Australia and New Zealand. One of his fans and perhaps the most prolific writer of Westerns was an Australian. Frank Leonard Meares wrotes 746 books, mostly as Marshall Grover.

anim8ed 🚫

Let us not forget the Paniolo and Parker Ranch. Established in 1815 and Vaquieros introduced in about 1830. Correct time frame, correct activities (cattle ranching and horse wrangling), just not quite the correct location. Parker Ranch is a 175,000 acre cattle ranch on the Big Island of Hawai'i. It was founded by King Kamehameha way back and is still one of the largest cattle operations in the US.

I imagine there is a story or two there that would be 'western like' as the paniolos (Hawaiian Cowboy) still embrace the rodeo/cowboy lifestyle.

As to the genre 'western', I tend to expect cowboys, cattle, horses and guns. Generally location as Texas and points west. As a reader that is my expectation. If I find something similar I am not going to make a stink over it. My family homesteaded the frontier in 1815 in the wild country of western Iowa where they had Indian raids and other issues. But then again, Davy Crockett's Grandfather was killed in an Indian raid in the late 1700s in Virginia I believe. Point being that while Indians are frequently in westerns I don't believe they are required for the genre nor do their presence in a story automatically make it a western.

Just my opinion. I respect the opinion of those who disagree. We all define things differently so differences aren't something to get bent out of shape over.

Replies:   Switch Blayde
Switch Blayde 🚫
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@anim8ed

Point being that while Indians are frequently in westerns I don't believe they are required for the genre nor do their presence in a story automatically make it a western.

Agree. "Last of the Mohicans" definitely isn't a Western.

Replies:   Radagast
Radagast 🚫

@Switch Blayde

"Last of the Mohicans" definitely isn't a Western.

If anything its an Eastern.
I would consider such stories Colonial. Different tech, for example whites used war clubs during some of the earlier Indian wars. Firearms were single shot. Colt received his revolver patent in 1836, it wasn't till the 1870s that large caliber cartridge revolvers were available, which could be kept constantly loaded in all weather. Bessemer steel didn't exist before the 1850s.

The environment was more constrained, forests and mountains rather than plains.
There was a different political environment, the old aristocratic families that America pretends not to have were more public in their power, the nation had not been ripped apart by civil war. Different Indians too, with established towns and farms, not landless refugees and plains nomads.

Replies:   Dominions Son
Dominions Son 🚫

@Radagast

I would consider such stories Colonial.

Colonial stories would set in the American Colonies. In other words the setting would be from before the American Revolution (at least ones set in what is now the US).

Stories set in the US or on the then US frontier in a time period between 1788 and 1830 would not be colonial.

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