Thank you to a couple of readers who took the time to contact me and point out mistakes.
I really appreciate it.
To me it means somebody actually reads and appreciate the story.
During the last while, I did a major upgrade of the story, the story telling is not so dark anymore, and the storyline continues to be much more preserved.
with some things, I painted myself into the corner and nothing will get me out of it.
please read and enjoy, sometimes use a bit more salt and remember that I am just an Afrikaanse "ou Toppie" having fun. (see if you can find a translation for than one).
I am a computer software engineer, writing c-sharp and SQL for a living.
Regards
(when I drove past the house this afternoon a gate was standing open... but why?)