Well, my first attempt is now submitted for posting.
I want to thank all of you for your input and words of encouragement. I will compile the corrections and make another grammar pass. along with fixing my continuity error.
There is a space for more stories, but I must work out the conflict.
With a lifetime of future knowledge, it would be too easy to have life just happen with no barriers to the MC's baser emotions and motives.
Any further stories will be finished before posting. I don't regret posting the first 6 chapters to try to force myself to finish what I started given the graveyard of 1 to 3 chapter stories in my Libre folder but now that I see that nothing bad happened when I clicked post hopefully I can do it again in the future