This is one of my early stories which I have just reread, torn apart, and put back together. I have reduced the lengths of my original chapters were much too long for comfortable reading so I have reduced each one and taken it from three to five chapters. Basically, the content is the same but it is better organized, which encourages me to write further chapters. I am working on chapter six and hope to have it up within two weeks.
Thank you for your continued interest in my writing.
Peter Duncan