So I got an email from someone...
If you can't finish a story in 5 years, you really should take up another hobby. It just isn't that good of a tale to take this long. Its ok, lots of folks aren't cut out to be writers.
Yep, that's why we do this.
Oh yeah, I didn't do any correcting to what he wrote. I'll leave it as is.
Sorry about venting, but I was in the middle of writing, and I chose to continue doing that rather than taking this guy's suggestion.
Back to the grind we go.
--Shinerdrinker