It has always been my goal to learn how to express sexual actions in as an erotically detailed way that makes me feel as much a part of the action as possible. So I often reread my work and see if I can improve it. I have just made some changes to Cunnilingus for Beginners and hope it reads well for those who have taken interest in my work.
Thanks to all of you for allowing me this luxury or (laughs) folly.