I am continually amazed by how well this story has been received. It has quickly moved to number four over series I have written years ago, now approaching 37,000 downloads and included in 423 libraries. Apparently the subject matter is appealing. It also comes when I have had years to work on my writing skills. While I don't have an editor any longer I have found that if I am meticulous in my own rereading and editing as I go the results become more flawless (please if you find any errors let me know). Presently I reread the story I am working on three times on a working edit before I submit. Additionally I have recently reread every chapter previously submitted, reedited as I read and resubmitted. Thank you all for the comments you have made, including criticism of my writing. I love doing this and have found a story that seems to flow quite easily.
thanks again,
Peter