After receiving heads-ups from numerous readers pointing out typos and other errors in In The Navy, and having a few evenings for myself, I went over the first 15 chapters to give them another polish. ITN was the first story I posted here and the kind reception it received was a main reason for me to continue.
This being said, it also showed strongly that I am not a native English speaker. So, for the time being, I revised the 15 chapters of Book 1, split three of them into separate chapters, and reposted the same storyline in 18 chapters. I also adapted and amended small parts of the storyline to reflect the research I have done since first dreaming up this tale. You, the reader, will find one supporting character playing a lesser and less positive role. This mostly due to the fact that he must have been a less than stellar officer, contrary to my original perception. I also eliminated some of the over-the-top sex scenes, making the sex purely vanilla and also, I hope, more realistic.
If you decide to have a look, drop me a note if possible to let me know what you think of the revision.
I am already working on Book 2 and hope to post a revision later this month.