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Mutiny On The Bunte Kuh - A Little Feedback

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Chapter 7 has a lot of explaining in it as Vivie finds out her fate and what she'll be doing from then on. It is queued for posting tomorrow (Saturday) morning.

I wrote it with the assumption that most of you are familiar with the Swarm universe and with at least some of my stories. I can revise if necessary, but I need for you to tell me if I'm okay or if and where more is needed or not needed. In addition to this story, it will help my future writing.

You've already rated this story with my 2nd highest score, and I truly appreciate that. But nothing is perfect, and your feedback will help me make my writing better.

If anyone is reading this as their first Swarm story, please let me know.

 

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