I had notes from folks who did not 'get' my transition from chapter 19 to 20. I added one sentence that I hope takes care of it.
Much thanks to those who let me know and to all the others who've caught typos and told me.
I'm overwhelmed with your response to the story. Bob started posting exactly a month ago. At my last look today, there have been 61,000 + downloads, and the story isn't done yet. Your comments have been kind and supportive, and your downloading of my other stories has also increased from an average of 500/week to almost 3,700/week. Even if I don't understand how downloads are calculated, that's still amazing support!
And to think that Bob started as a side thought while working on Mutiny on the Bunte Kuh (soon to follow - I hope) and was even a side thought to the story that started out being Calypso. Go figure...
I say again. If you like this story, thank my editors. If they hadn't kicked my butt, the story would have been much shorter.