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The Wilhelm Sonata - Chapter 3

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Latest chapter in the queue for posting, this time detailing what happens when Luke goes on a date with Leri, featuring tampons, ice-cream, a bustier, Leri's bĂȘte noire, and butter.

Also, this chapter might have a goof or two left in, as it's been a bit of a process.

Normally I write out first drafts in full, so I know who is saying and doing what, meaning I don't need to retcon anything subsequently. For some reason, this chapter was more scene sketches than fully written, so when it came to the editing process, there was more creation than normal. Add to that my learning a new word processor (Scrivener) which did something I wasn't expecting and which led to the creation of two side-by-side drafts which had to be merged and then edited again, and it's no exaggeration to say how much I'm looking forward to getting into the heavy edit of Chapter 4, when Leri comes for her sleepover at the Rowden's.

So double points to any oops spotters, and you'll never look at Lurpak the same ever again...

Clee

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