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The Wilhelm Scream - Chapter 11

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Freshly proof-read, this chapter is now in the queue for reposting.

This time round, there have been some real changes, nothing important, but Leri has been brought a little more in line with how she is in other chapters, not least because now I know her a lot better than I did when she helicoptered into this chapter originally. Luke's role is also a tad expanded to cover his reaction to Leri's bikini in a more cohesive manner.

No retcons, but a little amplification.

Clee

 

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